I need help and partner

I really could use some help with my story so if anyone is willing to be my partner I have huge writers block so if anyone is interested message me

Sure!

No problem. I can help also.

so I already have a story started but I have writers block and I don’t know where to go from here

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INT. BLACK - NIGHT
CARE BEAR
Hey guys I hope you like the story so far and I could use more people so if you want to be in my story message me

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White

@JENNA changes into pjs

@CHRISTOPH changes into boys pjs

@JENNA enters from right to screen left AND CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen right

@JENNA faces right

    JENNA (yawn_bored)
I'm so tired

    CHRISTOPH (talk_flex)
Oh did I keep you up to late last night

    JENNA (talk_flirt)
Maybe

    CHRISTOPH (laugh_chuckle)
So what do you want to do today?

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I was hopeing we could spend the day together and go out and do something

    CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
Or we could stay in today and go out later tonight

    JENNA (talk_unsure)
Why can't we go out now?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
You know I just remembered I have work so why don't you go home and I will see you tonight ok

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok but you picked me up you have to take me home I don't have my car.

@CHRISTOPH walks to screen center

@zoom on CHRISTOPH to 400% in 4

@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into Auburn

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
You will take the bus and not ask why I won't take you home and understand.

@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White

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    JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok well I guess I will see you later

    JENNA (kiss_passionate_loop)
Bye

    CHRISTOPH (kiss_passionate_loop)
Bye

@JENNA changes into red comfy

@CHRISTOPH changes into CHRISTOPH_default

@JENNA exits left AND CHRISTOPH exits left

INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

@JENNA enters from right to screen left AND CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen center

@JENNA faces right

    JENNA (talk_forward)
So what time are you picking me up?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
I will text you.

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok see you later

@JENNA exits left

    CHRISTOPH (idle_sad)
(I hate that I had to do that but if she knew the truth she would hate me forever)

INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY

@JENNA enters from left to screen center

    JENNA (talk_call_out)
Mom I'm home you here?

@MOM enters from right to screen right

    MOM (talk_forward)
Hey honey how was your night?

    JENNA (talk_awkward)
It was good.

    JENNA (think)
(Really good)

    MOM (talk_forward)
Thats good. How did you get home because I saw your car here last night?

    JENNA (think)
(How did I get home?)

    JENNA (talk_confused_mind_blown)
I can't remember

    MOM (talk_reassure)
Ok clam down you home safe and nothing happened

    JENNA (deepbreath)
(She is right)

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Ya your right

    MOM (talk_forward)
So what do you have planed today

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I probably am going out again tonight

    MOM (talk_forward)
Well take your car this time ok so this doesn't happen again ok

    JENNA (talk_exhausted)
Ok well I'm going to go take a nap I'm really tired

@JENNA exits right

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY

@JENNA enters from left to screen center

@pan to zone 2

@JENNA enters from left to screen left

    JENNA (walk_rear)
I need sleep

@JENNA spot 0.515 267 422

@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_awake_loop

    JENNA (lay_asleep_loop)
Zzz..

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INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

FILTER: Black and White

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@JENNA stands screen left AND CHRISTOPH stands screen center

@JENNA faces right AND CHRISTOPH faces left

@zoom on CHRISTOPH to 400% in 4

@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into Auburn

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
You will take the bus and not ask why I won't take you home and understand.

@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White

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INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY

@transition fade in white in 5

@pan to zone 2

    JENNA (lay_awake_loop)
What was that Chris eyes changed color. Its was just a dream

INT. BLACK - DAY

    NARRATOR
6 hrs later

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY

@pan to zone 2

@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_asleep_loop

    NARRATOR
Ring Ring

@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_awake_loop

    JENNA (stand_up)
What time is it

@JENNA walks to screen center

    JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Hey Chris

INT. CEO OFFICE OL - NIGHT

    CHRISTOPH (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Hey you ready for me to come pick you up?

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY

    JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
I'm going to drive my car I'll meet you at the house

INT. CEO OFFICE OL - NIGHT

    CHRISTOPH (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Ya thats fine

INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY

    JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Ok see you later

@JENNA changes into glasses

@JENNA exits left

INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY

@JENNA enters from right to screen left

@JENNA exits left

EXT. CITY HIGHWAY LOOP - NIGHT with CAR ANGLE SILVER

    NARRATOR
30 mins later

INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

    NARRATOR
Knock Knock

@CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen left

    CHRISTOPH (reach_grab)
Your here

@JENNA enters from left to screen center AND CHRISTOPH walks to screen right

@CHRISTOPH faces left

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So what do you want to do today

    JENNA (talk_forward)
I don't know how about you chose this time

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
We could go to dinner if you want

    JENNA (talk_forward)
That sounds good

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok lets go

@JENNA exits left AND CHRISTOPH exits left

INT. COZY RESTAURANT - DAY

@JENNA enters from left to screen right AND CHRISTOPH enters from left to screen left

@JENNA faces left

@JENNA spot 1.280 255 -117

    JENNA (talk_sit)
So do you own this place to?

@CHRISTOPH spot 1.280 61 -32

    CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
No this one I don't

@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center

    WAITRESS (write_notepad)
What can I get you?

@CHRISTOPH spot 1.280 65 -128

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
I will have pizza

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Same

    WAITRESS (talk_forward)
That will be right there

@WAITRESS exits right

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So what did you do today while I was at work?

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Slept

    JENNA (talk_forward)
I do have a question for you

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Go ahead

    JENNA (talk_forward)
How did I get home earlier because I can't remember

    CHRISTOPH (think)
(I thought I told her to understand)

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ya you took the bus because I had to go to work

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Oh I forgot

@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center

    WAITRESS (talk_forward)
Here is you food

@WAITRESS exits right

    JENNA (eat_pizza)
(This is really good)

    CHRISTOPH (eat_pizza)
Yum

    JENNA (talk_forward)
This is really good isn't it?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ya and we have some to take home to

@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center

    WAITRESS (talk_notepad_neutral)
Here is your check

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Thanks

@WAITRESS exits right

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok you ready to go

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Ya lets go

@CHRISTOPH exits left AND JENNA exits left

INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

@CHRISTOPH enters from left to screen right AND JENNA enters from left to screen left

@CHRISTOPH faces left

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So are you staying over tonight or are you going home tonight?

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I don't have school till Monday so I guess I could stay tonight

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok well its still early anything you want to do?

    JENNA (talk_forward)
We could watch a movie if you want

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Sounds good to me what movie?

    JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I like horror films what about you?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
I mean I don't mind horror movies but their not my favorite

    JENNA (talk_awkward)
Oh well what do you want to watch?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_reassure)
We can watch a horror movie I don't mind witch one do you want to watch

    JENNA (talk_excited)
30 days of night. I love vampire movie so much

    CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
Sure

    JENNA (talk_awkward)
Is everything ok?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Yeah everything is fine. Come on.

@CHRISTOPH walks to back far right AND JENNA walks to screen center

@JENNA spot 1.037 227 20 in zone 1

@JENNA sits lower screen center

    CHRISTOPH (sit)
(I hope I can put up with this movie)

    JENNA (talk_sit)
Are you sure you ok with this movie?

    CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
Ya why wouldn't I be

    JENNA (talk_sit)
I don't you seem off is all

    CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
No I'm fine really.

INT. BLACK - DAY

    NARRATOR
1 hour later

INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

@CHRISTOPH faces right

@JENNA sits lower screen center

@JENNA faces right

@CHRISTOPH spot 0.840 258 184 in zone 1

    CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
So how do you like the movie

    JENNA (talk_sit)
It's good

    CHRISTOPH (think)
(This shit is so stupid)

if you have any ideas that could help that would be awesome

First the outfit part is wrong, you cant have jus pjs you have to have the character name before it like this eg: @MEL changes into MEL_pjs or Mel_pjs

I’m not have a problem with that

idk where to go after what I wrote

As in how to switch scenes?

no where to go on the story

To preview it? Like to watch what you wrote?

My question is what is the story about? I can give you different ideas but I need the plot.

well its about a girl that ends up falling in love with a vampire and doesn’t know he is a vampire and I’m stuck on the part where they are watching a vampire movie and he really doesn’t like it but is acting like he dose for her and I dont know what to do bc he used mind control and i want her to relize it but idk how to get there and she has glasses