I really could use some help with my story so if anyone is willing to be my partner I have huge writers block so if anyone is interested message me
Sure!
No problem. I can help also.
so I already have a story started but I have writers block and I don’t know where to go from here
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INT. BLACK - NIGHT
CARE BEAR
Hey guys I hope you like the story so far and I could use more people so if you want to be in my story message me
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White
@JENNA changes into pjs
@CHRISTOPH changes into boys pjs
@JENNA enters from right to screen left AND CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen right
@JENNA faces right
JENNA (yawn_bored)
I'm so tired
CHRISTOPH (talk_flex)
Oh did I keep you up to late last night
JENNA (talk_flirt)
Maybe
CHRISTOPH (laugh_chuckle)
So what do you want to do today?
JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I was hopeing we could spend the day together and go out and do something
CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
Or we could stay in today and go out later tonight
JENNA (talk_unsure)
Why can't we go out now?
CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
You know I just remembered I have work so why don't you go home and I will see you tonight ok
JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok but you picked me up you have to take me home I don't have my car.
@CHRISTOPH walks to screen center
@zoom on CHRISTOPH to 400% in 4
@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into Auburn
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
You will take the bus and not ask why I won't take you home and understand.
@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White
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JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok well I guess I will see you later
JENNA (kiss_passionate_loop)
Bye
CHRISTOPH (kiss_passionate_loop)
Bye
@JENNA changes into red comfy
@CHRISTOPH changes into CHRISTOPH_default
@JENNA exits left AND CHRISTOPH exits left
INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
@JENNA enters from right to screen left AND CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen center
@JENNA faces right
JENNA (talk_forward)
So what time are you picking me up?
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
I will text you.
JENNA (talk_forward)
Ok see you later
@JENNA exits left
CHRISTOPH (idle_sad)
(I hate that I had to do that but if she knew the truth she would hate me forever)
INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
@JENNA enters from left to screen center
JENNA (talk_call_out)
Mom I'm home you here?
@MOM enters from right to screen right
MOM (talk_forward)
Hey honey how was your night?
JENNA (talk_awkward)
It was good.
JENNA (think)
(Really good)
MOM (talk_forward)
Thats good. How did you get home because I saw your car here last night?
JENNA (think)
(How did I get home?)
JENNA (talk_confused_mind_blown)
I can't remember
MOM (talk_reassure)
Ok clam down you home safe and nothing happened
JENNA (deepbreath)
(She is right)
JENNA (talk_forward)
Ya your right
MOM (talk_forward)
So what do you have planed today
JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I probably am going out again tonight
MOM (talk_forward)
Well take your car this time ok so this doesn't happen again ok
JENNA (talk_exhausted)
Ok well I'm going to go take a nap I'm really tired
@JENNA exits right
INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY
@JENNA enters from left to screen center
@pan to zone 2
@JENNA enters from left to screen left
JENNA (walk_rear)
I need sleep
@JENNA spot 0.515 267 422
@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_awake_loop
JENNA (lay_asleep_loop)
Zzz..
@transition fade out white in 5
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
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@JENNA stands screen left AND CHRISTOPH stands screen center
@JENNA faces right AND CHRISTOPH faces left
@zoom on CHRISTOPH to 400% in 4
@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into Auburn
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
You will take the bus and not ask why I won't take you home and understand.
@CHRISTOPH changes eyesColor into White
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@reset hsl
INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY
@transition fade in white in 5
@pan to zone 2
JENNA (lay_awake_loop)
What was that Chris eyes changed color. Its was just a dream
INT. BLACK - DAY
NARRATOR
6 hrs later
INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY
@pan to zone 2
@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_asleep_loop
NARRATOR
Ring Ring
@JENNA spot 0.5 257 426 in zone 2 AND JENNA faces right AND JENNA starts lay_awake_loop
JENNA (stand_up)
What time is it
@JENNA walks to screen center
JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Hey Chris
INT. CEO OFFICE OL - NIGHT
CHRISTOPH (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Hey you ready for me to come pick you up?
INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY
JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
I'm going to drive my car I'll meet you at the house
INT. CEO OFFICE OL - NIGHT
CHRISTOPH (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Ya thats fine
INT. GHAMALI BEDROOM - DAY
JENNA (listen_phone_happy_loop)
Ok see you later
@JENNA changes into glasses
@JENNA exits left
INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
@JENNA enters from right to screen left
@JENNA exits left
EXT. CITY HIGHWAY LOOP - NIGHT with CAR ANGLE SILVER
NARRATOR
30 mins later
INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Knock Knock
@CHRISTOPH enters from right to screen left
CHRISTOPH (reach_grab)
Your here
@JENNA enters from left to screen center AND CHRISTOPH walks to screen right
@CHRISTOPH faces left
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So what do you want to do today
JENNA (talk_forward)
I don't know how about you chose this time
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
We could go to dinner if you want
JENNA (talk_forward)
That sounds good
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok lets go
@JENNA exits left AND CHRISTOPH exits left
INT. COZY RESTAURANT - DAY
@JENNA enters from left to screen right AND CHRISTOPH enters from left to screen left
@JENNA faces left
@JENNA spot 1.280 255 -117
JENNA (talk_sit)
So do you own this place to?
@CHRISTOPH spot 1.280 61 -32
CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
No this one I don't
@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center
WAITRESS (write_notepad)
What can I get you?
@CHRISTOPH spot 1.280 65 -128
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
I will have pizza
JENNA (talk_forward)
Same
WAITRESS (talk_forward)
That will be right there
@WAITRESS exits right
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So what did you do today while I was at work?
JENNA (talk_forward)
Slept
JENNA (talk_forward)
I do have a question for you
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Go ahead
JENNA (talk_forward)
How did I get home earlier because I can't remember
CHRISTOPH (think)
(I thought I told her to understand)
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ya you took the bus because I had to go to work
JENNA (talk_forward)
Oh I forgot
@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center
WAITRESS (talk_forward)
Here is you food
@WAITRESS exits right
JENNA (eat_pizza)
(This is really good)
CHRISTOPH (eat_pizza)
Yum
JENNA (talk_forward)
This is really good isn't it?
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ya and we have some to take home to
@WAITRESS enters from right to screen center
WAITRESS (talk_notepad_neutral)
Here is your check
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Thanks
@WAITRESS exits right
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok you ready to go
JENNA (talk_forward)
Ya lets go
@CHRISTOPH exits left AND JENNA exits left
INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
@CHRISTOPH enters from left to screen right AND JENNA enters from left to screen left
@CHRISTOPH faces left
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
So are you staying over tonight or are you going home tonight?
JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I don't have school till Monday so I guess I could stay tonight
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Ok well its still early anything you want to do?
JENNA (talk_forward)
We could watch a movie if you want
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Sounds good to me what movie?
JENNA (talk_forward)
Well I like horror films what about you?
CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
I mean I don't mind horror movies but their not my favorite
JENNA (talk_awkward)
Oh well what do you want to watch?
CHRISTOPH (talk_reassure)
We can watch a horror movie I don't mind witch one do you want to watch
JENNA (talk_excited)
30 days of night. I love vampire movie so much
CHRISTOPH (talk_awkward)
Sure
JENNA (talk_awkward)
Is everything ok?
CHRISTOPH (talk_forward)
Yeah everything is fine. Come on.
@CHRISTOPH walks to back far right AND JENNA walks to screen center
@JENNA spot 1.037 227 20 in zone 1
@JENNA sits lower screen center
CHRISTOPH (sit)
(I hope I can put up with this movie)
JENNA (talk_sit)
Are you sure you ok with this movie?
CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
Ya why wouldn't I be
JENNA (talk_sit)
I don't you seem off is all
CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
No I'm fine really.
INT. BLACK - DAY
NARRATOR
1 hour later
INT. FANCY LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
@CHRISTOPH faces right
@JENNA sits lower screen center
@JENNA faces right
@CHRISTOPH spot 0.840 258 184 in zone 1
CHRISTOPH (talk_sit)
So how do you like the movie
JENNA (talk_sit)
It's good
CHRISTOPH (think)
(This shit is so stupid)
if you have any ideas that could help that would be awesome
First the outfit part is wrong, you cant have jus pjs you have to have the character name before it like this eg: @MEL changes into MEL_pjs or Mel_pjs
I’m not have a problem with that
idk where to go after what I wrote
As in how to switch scenes?
no where to go on the story
To preview it? Like to watch what you wrote?
My question is what is the story about? I can give you different ideas but I need the plot.
well its about a girl that ends up falling in love with a vampire and doesn’t know he is a vampire and I’m stuck on the part where they are watching a vampire movie and he really doesn’t like it but is acting like he dose for her and I dont know what to do bc he used mind control and i want her to relize it but idk how to get there and she has glasses