I need help please


#1

Not sure how to fix this problem
Can someone help?


#2

Hey, @Mulasia!

The problem is that you haven’t used a curly bracket, and that the choice isn’t following a dialogue. Try writing it like this instead:

               INSERT CHARACTER NAME HERE
       Insert dialogue here.

choice

“Doesn’t matter, go meet Linda”{


If dialogue is unnecessary, you can always put in a ‘…’ However, choices must always follow a dialogue.

Hope this helped!


#3

I’m sorry but i still don’t understand this is my first time editing online and I’m so confused🤦🏾‍♀️ Could you write it for me?


#4

Yeah, sure. I’m using Mulasia as the character since she’s the one I see in your script. So it should look like:

                      MULASIA 
             (...)

choice
“Doesn’t matter, go meet Linda”{

And then you can continue your story.

Try this and let me know if it works.


#5

Thanks that works!:slight_smile:️ Can you help me with this too​:sob:


#6

Have you created the character MULASIA??


#7

Yes


#8

Yeah, I can see what’s wrong.

Right above the dialogue, you’ve written choice but you haven’t actually given one. All you have to do is actually add the choice.

Try this:

                            NARRATOR
          Go back to his hotel?

choice
“Yes”{

                            MULASIA
          I'll come.

There ya go!


#9

I understand that you’ve just started out with your first story, but I strongly recommend going through these guides before you continue. Not only will it help you out in coding and writing your story, but it’ll also be a lot less time consuming once you’ve learnt how everything works.

Good luck! xx