I need help putting this as a "teaser"!

I need help trying to make this whole plot of mine into a 180 character limited suspenseful summary! Anyone mind helping? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
If you could message me privately that would be great!

Summary

The story is about a twenty-six-year-old woman by the name of Artemis Blackherm. She was adopted into the Blackherm family a year after she was found roaming the streets aimlessly in a ballgown and with no clue where she was and what her name was. Her social worker named her Artemis, because the night that Artemis had appeared, the moon had turned a crimson red, a phenomenon that no one could explain, thirteen years after the fact. Artemis was always the black sheep, always found far away from the crowd. She tried her best to fit in, but no matter how hard she tried she didn’t feel like this world had a place for her. After years of trying to fit in, she decides that enough is enough and she should just be herself. Her adoptive father didn’t enjoy it very much, needless to say. As some form of fear that Artemis would stray too far from the Blackherm business, he arranges to combine the business with another, pushing the business on both Artemis and Ethan, someone she knew from high school, his dad being a business partner of her adoptive father. Ethan and Artemis are engraged by this, due to the fact that they’ve never wanted anything to do with their parents business. Artemis even more so because she doesn’t even see them as family. on the same day that Artemis finds out about this arrangement, it’s a full moon. Artemis comes home to a man passed out in front of her apartment building. She felt almost an immediate connection with this mystery man, almost like she had recognized him from somewhere before. She brings him in and nurses him to health over the next week until he wakes from his almost grave-like state. When he does wake up, he goes into a panic upon seeing her, calling her “Adossia” and “princess”, telling her that they need her gravely and that she is the only one that is able to help them. She tells him to calm down, and asks what he is talking about.

He introduces himself as Theowith, and he proclaims that he was sent to bring her back to her original home. You see, in her previous life, she was a princess of the kingdom of Edonia, Princess Adossa, to be clear. Their kingdom had been betrayed by King Naelus of the kingdom of Daewryth, and King Naelus had killed Artemis’/Adossia’s uncle, king Lyces on the night that they had announced their treaty. Adossia/Artemis is the rightful heir to the throne, and the only one who can properly defeat King Naelus and restore the kingdom of Edonia to its former glory, which is why madam Nethilia, a prophet of the magic god of Edonia, sent Adossia to earth to keep the bloodline safe until the time had come when she was able to reclaim the throne of Edonia and take down king Naelus once and for all. Artemis/Adossia has to make a series of tough decisions throughout the story and eventually she finds romance with Theo. or… who she believes to be Theo.

God bless you if you made it all the way through that

Thank you to anyone that helps me take this on!!

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I could try!

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Shyness and business doesn’t go hand in hand. But what happens the night you find how your dad tried to push you into business? Will you be able to fight your fears and find peace?

This is my first teaser ever. ever. Might have some mistakes, but let me know what you think about it. I’m sure others will have better ideas too, or maybe will modify this to something more catchy. Good luck with your story!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :heartpulse:

PS: Also I hope I didnt exceed the word limit lol :sweat_smile:

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Ah, thank you! That’s a really good teaser but the story mostly takes place in her fantasy world so I kind of want it to allude to her being from another world :sweat_smile:

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Oh I get it! My bad, the precision of the meeting and all was too accurate for me i guess. I’ll pm you if I get more ideas or just edit the previous reply :heartpulse:

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