I need help with a description

opinion

#1

So I have ideas for a decription but I just want to make sure I have a good story
The title I have for my story is Ruthless
The description I have already written She’s the daughter of the most ruthless mafia boss, what happens when she’s arranged to marry they’re worst enemy? I don’t want my story to sound to cliche and if you would read a story like this plz let me know.


#2

When the daughter of the most ruthless mafia boss in the business is arranged to marry their sworn enemy…
Will the arrangement end in disaster? Or be a useful union?

Sorry it’s not very good :joy:


#3

I can think of one but can you please just tell me the MC names?


#4

No I actually really like that. It’s not bad thanks :smile:


#5

No worries :slightly_smiling_face:


#6

yea a couple of them are: Mark, Samuel, Emily, and Isabelle (those are just the main characters)


#7

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#8

Ok well maybe you can have ‘As a test on whether or not -MC- is loyal to her gang, she is forced to go through many trials, one of which is to marry her sworn enemy - of whom wishes nothing of the sort.’

Sorry if it’s bad (eg. too long) but I don’t really read those type of stories… I really do hope you find an amazing description to fit your story (which’ll turn out incredible)!Good luck!


#9

Thanks i hope to find one too. It’s not too long either it also sounds very interesting. :slight_smile:


#10