I need help with fixing a scene

I decided to finally start on my story The New Start but I need help with a certain scene. I want the MC to walk while using the exhausted walking loop to a certain spot. After she reaches that certain she would yawn. I also want the camera to zoom on her face.

My Script

INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
@cut to zone 1
@YOU spot 1.136 70 10 in zone 1
@zoom on 364 307 to 258% in 0
&YOU walks to spot 1.136 107 31 in zone 2 in 5 AND YOU is walk_exhausted_loop
&pan to zone 2 in 4.5
@YOU is yawn_bored
@zoom on 419 343 to 479% in 0
@pause for 5

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I think You need to use the does it while command so it would look like this

INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
@cut to zone 1
@YOU spot 1.136 70 10 in zone 1
@zoom on 364 307 to 258% in 0
&YOU walks to spot 1.136 107 31 in zone 2 in 5 AND YOU does it while walk_exhausted_loop
&pan to zone 2 in 4.5
@YOU is yawn_bored
@zoom on 419 343 to 479% in 0
@pause for 5

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Here you go.(:

INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
&cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 0 307 to 258% in 0 AND YOU spot 1.136 70 10 in zone 1 
&pan to zone 2 in 5 and zoom on 364 307 to 258% in 5
@YOU walks to spot 1.136 107 31 in zone 2 in 5 AND YOU does it while walk_exhausted_loop
&zoom on 419 343 to 479% in 0.6
@YOU is yawn_bored
@pause for a beat
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Thanks

Thank you.

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