I Need Help With Grammar PLEASE

I did several times r4r and in response they said there was a grammar problem so someone could help I would be happy :wink:

Thank you English this is your language

What kind of :grinning:

Nvm ?

You know English at least a good American style

Ok now how do we do this how you correct me the grammar read the story then camera the mistakes and tell me how to write instead ?

how i do that ?

email is quite personal no ?:thinking:

At least we’ll know each other a bit
How old are you

ok i try I’ll shoot every scene

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