I need help with making my story more interesting


#1

I need anyone to help me here


#2

So, whatcha got so far?


#3

Make a brainstorming book and Google great story ideas for what ever your story is about for examples if your story is a drama filled story look up great ideas for a drama story. Happy writing!


#4

I have a school girl who gets pregnant after transferring to a new school…mum chases her away…lives with her dad…meets a guy and goes out with him and gets shot on that day and loses one of her twin daughters


#5

Thanks


#6

What about the boy, stops talking to her or that she gets picked on because she’s pregnant & in high school? Something like that


#7

The boy doesn’t even talk to her until about 4 or 5 months later since she lives with her dad


#8

Ok, well what about you add some plots to this story, Make it look like she’s confused as to how he life is going. But,also add a miracle to this story


#9

Yeah…I also need help with choices


#10

Would you mind writing this story with me??


#11

I’m currently writing a story, but what type of choices do you have in mind?


#12

whether to kiss or not to kiss someone


#14

And choices between two or more outfits


#15

well do you know how to do choices?


#16

I do but then every time I try save the episode it displays an error


#17

Well, that means you probably did something wrong. Are you doing limelight or ink?


#18

I’m using limelight


#19

Check this out then: https://youtu.be/Y5U7jAUpGFk


#20

Thank you for the video link


#21

You welcome! Did it help?