I need help with making my story more interesting

Well, that means you probably did something wrong. Are you doing limelight or ink?

I’m using limelight

Check this out then: https://youtu.be/Y5U7jAUpGFk

Thank you for the video link

You welcome! Did it help?

I’m still trying to figure it out

So, do you need help?

Not just yet

Ok

It worked…Thank you so much

You welcome!

Sure

I need help with a reflection
Like a flashback

So, you would like your characters to be faded am I right?

Yes…I think

Go Here! How to "FADE" Characters

Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for help with a story pitch. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics. :wink:

Thank you

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How about doing flashbacks it makes the story interesting!