Here’s my code but I keep getting an error
You need to have dialogue to start a choice.
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Okay thanks and sorry!
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No problem!
You can keep posting here if you have more problems. Maybe change the title of this thread to something like “I need help with my script” and just keep using this thread to ask for help.
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Okay thank you so much I’ll do that! 
I’m having another error, im trying to do this point
system thing but it’s saying that line 3095 does not have a matching bracket please help
You need another bracket on 3158 so }}else{
Now the error is on that line 
is the bracket for else closed?
try removing one of the brackets on that line
remove the bracket before premium on that line
Now I got the unexpected string error again
can you copy and paste here the whole part of the script with all the options so I can see it fully
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Is there a point where you will be on a device that you can copy/paste your script from? My computer wouldn’t expand your second SS so all the code is tiny lol could just be my laptop being weird though.
String errors usually come from having an extra bracket somewhere – so maybe highlight each choice in its entirety and make sure that every one has a } “option2” { at the beginning and a } at the end.
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I managed to copy and paste it:
INT. DINING ROOM RESIDENTIAL - DAY
@zoom reset
@MOM faces right
@MOM spot 0.958 252 113 and MOM is sit
@YOU spot 0.958 -43 145 in zone 1
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 58 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@MOM faces left
MOM (talk_sit)
Oh, goodmorning hun!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_neutral)
Good morning, mom.
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Would you like to have breakfast with me?
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
if (YOU <0) {
label pick_a_option
YOU (think)
choice
“Eat breakfast with Mom”{
NARRATOR
Unfortunately, you don’t have enough relationship points for this dialogue option!
NARRATOR
Be more nice to Sheldon in the future if you wish to unlock more dialogue options.
goto pick_a_option
}”Go to school"{
YOU (talk_sheepish)
Sorry, mom. But I really have to go.
@YOU -1
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Oh, okay… that’s fine.
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
@you is idle_awkward
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
YOU (talk_awkward)
Well… I’ll see you later mom.
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
See you. Love you, hun.
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_sheepish)
Love you too.
@YOU faces left
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 -70 135 and YOU is
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@MOM is deepbreath
@pause for a beat
}
}else{
readerMessage | bold , color:orange | Yay! You have enough relationship points and you’ve unlocked this option!
label pick_a_option
YOU (think)
…
choice
“Eat breakfast with mom” {
readerMessage| bold, color:orange I+1 I bold |relationship point!
YOU (talk_exclaim_yes)
I’d love to!
@YOU +1
zoom reset
@MOM spot 0.980 245 139 in zone 1
@MOM is stand up
@pause for a beat
@zoom on MOM to 200% in 0
MOM (talk_happy_agree)
I’ll go get the food.
@MOM faces right
&MOM walks to spot 0.980 54 139 in zone 2 and YOU is arms_crossed
@pause for a beat
@zoom on YOU to 200% in 0
@YOU is idle_read_phone_neutral
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 320 341 to 226% in 0
@SHELDON spot 0.967 52 148 in zone 2
&SHELDON walks to spot 0.967 263 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@SHELDON is think
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 0 353 to 226% in 0
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 320 341 to 226% in 0
SHELDON (talk_greet)
Good morning.
@zoom on 0 353 to 226% in 0
@YOU is startled surprised
@pause for a beat
YOU (talk_startled)
Sheldon!
}”Go to school"{
readerMessage | bold, color: blue | No relationship points affected.
YOU (talk_happy_agree)
I’d love to eat breakfast with you, Mom. But I really have to go!
YOU (talk_sheepish)
I have a reeealllyy important test and I wanna go to the library before to study!
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
That’s fine, hun!
MOM (talk sit_ankles_crossed)
Do well on your test!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks mom, love you!
@zoom on 304 270 to 2413 in 6
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Love you sweetpea!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 9
@YOU faces left
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 -70 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@pause for a beat
@MOM spot 0.980 245 139 in zone 1
@MOM is stand_up
@pause for a beat
@MOM faces right
&MOM walks to spot 0.958 43 109 in zone 2 and MOM is walk exhausted
I managed to copy and paste it:
INT. DINING ROOM RESIDENTIAL - DAY
@zoom reset
@MOM faces right
@MOM spot 0.958 252 113 and MOM is sit
@YOU spot 0.958 -43 145 in zone 1
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 58 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@MOM faces left
MOM (talk_sit)
Oh, goodmorning hun!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_neutral)
Good morning, mom.
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Would you like to have breakfast with me?
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
if (YOU <0) {
label pick_a_option
YOU (think)
choice
“Eat breakfast with Mom”{
NARRATOR
Unfortunately, you don’t have enough relationship points for this dialogue option!
NARRATOR
Be more nice to Sheldon in the future if you wish to unlock more dialogue options.
goto pick_a_option
}”Go to school"{
YOU (talk_sheepish)
Sorry, mom. But I really have to go.
@YOU -1
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Oh, okay… that’s fine.
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
@you is idle_awkward
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
YOU (talk_awkward)
Well… I’ll see you later mom.
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
See you. Love you, hun.
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_sheepish)
Love you too.
@YOU faces left
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 -70 135 and YOU is
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@MOM is deepbreath
@pause for a beat
}
}else{
readerMessage | bold , color:orange | Yay! You have enough relationship points and you’ve unlocked this option!
label pick_a_option
YOU (think)
…
choice
“Eat breakfast with mom” {
readerMessage| bold, color:orange I+1 I bold |relationship point!
YOU (talk_exclaim_yes)
I’d love to!
@YOU +1
zoom reset
@MOM spot 0.980 245 139 in zone 1
@MOM is stand up
@pause for a beat
@zoom on MOM to 200% in 0
MOM (talk_happy_agree)
I’ll go get the food.
@MOM faces right
&MOM walks to spot 0.980 54 139 in zone 2 and YOU is arms_crossed
@pause for a beat
@zoom on YOU to 200% in 0
@YOU is idle_read_phone_neutral
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 320 341 to 226% in 0
@SHELDON spot 0.967 52 148 in zone 2
&SHELDON walks to spot 0.967 263 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@SHELDON is think
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 0 353 to 226% in 0
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 320 341 to 226% in 0
SHELDON (talk_greet)
Good morning.
@zoom on 0 353 to 226% in 0
@YOU is startled surprised
@pause for a beat
YOU (talk_startled)
Sheldon!
}”Go to school"{
readerMessage | bold, color: blue | No relationship points affected.
YOU (talk_happy_agree)
I’d love to eat breakfast with you, Mom. But I really have to go!
YOU (talk_sheepish)
I have a reeealllyy important test and I wanna go to the library before to study!
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
That’s fine, hun!
MOM (talk sit_ankles_crossed)
Do well on your test!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 0
YOU (talk_happy_agree)
Thanks mom, love you!
@zoom on 304 270 to 2413 in 6
MOM (talk_sit_ankles_crossed)
Love you sweetpea!
@zoom on 0 350 to 241% in 9
@YOU faces left
&YOU walks to spot 0.958 -70 135 in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 304 270 to 241% in 0
@pause for a beat
@MOM spot 0.980 245 139 in zone 1
@MOM is stand_up
@pause for a beat
@MOM faces right
&MOM walks to spot 0.958 43 109 in zone 2 and MOM is walk exhausted
Have you got the two closing brackets after the script ends? In the part youve copied you’re missing two closing brackets but could just be missed off the bit you’ve copied.
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