I Need Help With Writing My First Story

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#1

I just finished the first episode of my very first story a week ago. But I’m not sure if the whole episode’s plot flows together! Please, I need someone with experience or at least who knows what they’re doing! This isn’t the first time I’ve had this problem!


#2

Hi there! So, I’m currently writing my own story (I’ll send you the script if you wish) and I’ll help you if you want! But first, you’ll have to send a brief description of what your story is about.


#3

Yeah, that would be perfect the description of my story is:
“What Will Happen After 15-year-old Emma Gives Birth To Her Twin Daughters, Isabella And Hope, Will She Find Happiness??”


#4

Ooh that sounds good. What genre are you aiming for your story?


#5

Romance/Drama


#6

Ok, lots of that?


#7

Yeah, But I’ve Never Been A Writer Before! So I Really Do Need Help Making Sure The Plot Of Each Episode Flows With Itself & The Main Story line!


#8

Ok, I’m currently writing my first story too so I feel your pain, but I normally have a brief plan of what’s going to happen in each episode, for example:
Episode 1; intro to Emma and her average life then something like ‘this is what my life was like, before I made the biggest mistake.’ then cut to her sleeping with some stranger at a party wasted then say what her life is like now.
At least then you have a basic plan.


#9

Thanks, You’re Really Nice To Be Helping Me!


#10

It’s fine! If you need anything else don’t hesitate to contact me via DM or Instagram (epy.kaleidoscope)


#11

What’s Weird Is, Right Now… The Episode Ends With Felix (Emma’s Crush) Asking Emma Out On A Date And Emma Reacting Shocked! Ha ha, And In The Beginning I Even Resorted To Emma’s Mom Going Into Labor… Is That Goofy?


#12

Not at all! It just goes to show how young Emma really is


#13

So, I’m Guessing That Was A Good Move For The First Episode?


#14

Very! You’ve got a good plot going and storyline, that’s the start to a good writer :slight_smile:


#15

You’re So Sweet! Thanks For The Help!


#16

No problem!


#17

One Last Thing For Now, Roughly Around Which Episode Should I Introduce The Actual Pregnancy?? And Here’s A Screenshot Of My First Scene In My Second Episode


#18

I could help I really don’t mind!:blush::blush:


#19

That Would Be So Cool! Honestly I Feel Like I Need All The Help I Can Get!


#20

Hmm… maybe Episode 3?