I Need Help With Writing My First Story

Actually… They’ve Already Been Friends For A While Before The Story Started

Sorry been zoned out 4 a while just creating characters 4 new story

Oh okay u can still create that section but instead she should be thinking if this was the right move what if they should stay friends but in the end she goes

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Okay Then. Here’s What I’m Thinking… There’s A Time Skip To The Night Before The Date Right Before Emma Goes To Bed… But She Can’t Fall Asleep, She’s Worried Her Crush On Felix Might Ruin The Friendship She Builds With Him. But She Goes On The Date The Next Night Anyway!

That’s really good!!

Sorry that I was away for a while my hairdresser came to my house to put on some crotchet

Thanks! And Don’t Hesitate To Ask For My Help If You need it. And It’s Fine I Understand

Idk why but it never shows me if anyone has replied to me so I always have to go on writer forum app to see of I have new msgs also your idea seems nice sorry that I’m having to edit this it says new users r only allowed to use 3 reply limits which is weird cause I’m not new… anyway the necklace idea seems nice you should do it and she should say yes but let her be hesitant and then Felix realises and then she starts laughing and says YES YES YES!

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Sorry I’ve been gone for a while…party planning May 3rd was my birthday I can see that I’ve missed a lot…hope you haven’t replaced me​:slight_smile::thinking:

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Of course not! But I Am On Episode 3 Now! What Should Episode 3 Be Called? Also, Happy Late Birthday!

Hey, just a heads up:

From this post :

Additionally, we do not allow romantic stories about teenagers under the age of 16 and no stories that focus on children under the age of 13. If there are romantic stories about children under the age of 16, please report them to us.

You might want to think about making your characters 16? I believe there have been stories banned in the past because the characters were 15 and pregnant.

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Thanks I’ll Change Her Age Now!

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Is It Normal For A Speech Bubble to be This Low?

What If I Add a scene where she’s, of course, throwing up in the bathroom.
Maybe a scene of going to school. A scene of going to the doctors & then she finds out at the end. In Episode 3?

Maybe you should put your speech bubble higher :slight_smile:
But I love the look of the characters & that scene.

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Yea so episode 3 she finds out she preggers vomits starts craving mood swings then Felix takes her to the docs and they find out and then she thinks about abortion

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Diamond? Have You… Lost Interest In Helping Me? :frowning_face: If So, Just Tell Me And I’ll Stop Bothering You…

No of course now I downloaded the forums but I can’t use it on weekdays and weekends that why