I need honest opinions on my story idea please

Twins, brother and sister, are unique in more than one way. They find out they’re witches from a bloodline that dates all the way back to the Salem witch trials. They’re forced into a coven by a power-hungry leader, Mallory.

The initiation into the coven happens on the night of their fifteenth-birthday. On October 31st, midnight, the coven members gather in the woods in a private, protected, and closed-off area away from the humans of the town. They host a ceremony to initiate the twins into the coven.

Mallory is hosting it as the leader, obvs, and she has the twins sign their names on an enchanted scroll. Once they’ve done that and made their vows to the coven, they make a blood-pact/promise by cutting their hands and mixing their blood with each member of the coven. This connects them to others and also makes them stronger as a witch in their sense of power.

After the ceremony and their entrance into the coven, three months pass when the story really begins.
This story in, my opinion, as far as I’ve mentally planned it :sweat_smile:, is mostly surrounding werewolves and witches. I’ve come up with the idea that witches and wolves don’t get along well together seeing as how I’ve come up with a legend for the story explaining how the witches, centuries ago, cursed a man by turning him into a werewolf and he killed his wife. There’s more to it but I think you’ll get the idea.

Anyway, my main character, Maddie is approached by these two boys who find out that she’s a witch due to an exploding incident early on (I’ll just say that it was something unexplainable, witchy). they want to know if there’s a cure to a werewolf bit. :cat_shocked:

Furthermore, Maddie gets involved into the werewolf world and it’s against her coven’s rules. One of their biggest rules actually. Her twin, who always feels the need to have to look out for her, makes sure to do everything in his power to keep their coven from finding out that she’s using magic to help out her new friends.

Let me know what you guys think so far…

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I think it’s great! :sparkles:

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Not to be rude, your story seems to be empty…I think that you have to fill more suspence in the story…
I love the part where you added werewolves and witches…the word magic makes the story very interesting…
I hope that readers love your story…
And sorry once again if you don’t like this statement…it was an honest opinion… Suspence makes a story very interesting…readers loves suspence…
Thanks

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