Not to be rude, your story seems to be empty…I think that you have to fill more suspence in the story…
I love the part where you added werewolves and witches…the word magic makes the story very interesting…
I hope that readers love your story…
And sorry once again if you don’t like this statement…it was an honest opinion… Suspence makes a story very interesting…readers loves suspence…
Thanks
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