I’ve only wrote 3 chapters so far but I’d really love to constructive criticism on my story and how I could improve. Or just general feedback.
This is what it’s all about:
It is about a a notorious British Gang set in the early 20th century and will contain a series of plots a twists
Description: Ada Payton leads the Gnarly stripers, A gang set in 1920 London. After letting power get to her head. She soon realises the danger she has put herself and the people around her In.
Ah thank you! Yes I was already told about the first one and have started to do that with the other episodes. I will go back and edit the first episode.
and the other two, I’ll have a look into that, it might’ve been the way I’ve zoomed in.
But anyways thank you