I’ve read 4 of yours and I’ll leave some feedback. This is in no way meant to be mean.
I think you should stop promoting this story and focus on fixing it.
You have characters gliding all over the place. They randomly show up in new scenes without any transitions.
I couldn’t understand any of your dialogue meaning I had absolutely no idea what your story was about. Your grammar really needs to be worked on.
Your chapters are way too short and does not grab the readers attention. I have no idea what your characters are meant to be doing, what their personalities are like, there was no emotional basis.
Your characters aren’t talking when their speechbubbles come up, they are also off.
The whole story I think, should really be re-evaluated.
I hope this doesn’t come off as mean or anything as I want you to have a good story on your hands.
Thank you for the comment. I literally working on the story but I just don’t have to much time on my hands because I’m really pushing my efforts towards graduating highschool next year.
Hi all! Im hennehc i just finish my first 3 episodes of my new story hope you’ll try it and btw im up for R4R! just send me dm!
Title: Once Upon an Us.
Author: hennehc_episode
Genre: Romance
Desc:A woman who’s a stranger in her own memories, will her fate changes her new identity? Or her fate will haunt her until the end? What if someone is willing to cross her path?..
Style: Limelight
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4792442350796800
Hey, thanks for the thread! I would love to do R4R with you!
Story Name: What You’ve Always Wanted
Author Name: Shronus
Style: Limelight
Completion Status: 5 (more coming, working on 6!)
CC: Yes!
General description: Rachel, one out the many who has a complicated secret. Everyone now knows, and her life is turned upside down into the inevitable path of love, trust, secrets, and betrayals. [CC, LL]
Description: Ellie and her friends are used to being on the run from the scanners in their dystopian society. But who will come to her rescue after she is face to face with one?
You can also write me in Instagram about R4R - @vals.episode
Description:
Your boyfriend leaves in an unknown direction. You know what happened last time. Along the way you meet different people. Will you end up with him?
LL, CC, choice matters
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Here is the description of my story :
Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : Jiselle loves her grandmother’s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ‘Neverland’ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!
Here’s mine Name : Right Beside you [Axiom hidden gem] Plot : After a traumatizing event, Nadine’s health turned upside down. Can she recuperate after visiting an Eating Recovery Center? It’s up to you. [CC/LL/POINTSYSTEM/CHOICE MATTER]
Episodes : 11
Status : On going
Gerne : Drama & Romance
Style : Limelight
CC : Available
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5251847875788800
My IG : nellyy.epi You can watch my story trailer here .
Hi! I’d really like to de an r4r
Title: The Mermaid
Description: Naia, eager to de-throne her vicious mother and start making changes in mermaid law, must find and bring back the mermaid tear, which is lost in the human world. CC/ Choices Matter
Author: Paula
Genre: Fantasy
We can do r fr r
Title : Hannah Miler’s Mystery
Author: Remone
Story genre :Mystery
Story style :lime light
Description: Hannah Miler was brutally killed in the woods.Will Ser be able to solve the mystery of Hannah miler’s death and will able to find the killer ?.And how is Ser related to Hannah.(CC)
Author: Carlita Bregante Genre: Action/Drama Episodes: 9 (more to come) Description: Bad girl Nadine has it all figured out. That’s until, she ends up in the clutches of the sexy but"treacherous"Nico, who harbors a dangerous secret. Will she choose to run or stay? Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6590375344275456
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I have a story called “Stranded”
I’ be happy to do a R4R if you’re interested! Here’s a little background:
-Genre: Adventure
-Length: Currently 3 episodes and continuing.
-Description: After living a boring and repetitive life, you’re offered an opportunity of a lifetime. You leave your family behind and take your best friend to New York to begin your new journey. But little do you know, someone has other plans for you. The plane crashes on an island you think is inhabited. Find out what happens when you discover the real reason behind the crash.
-1 Love interest
-2 people to become friends with