(I NEED OPINIONS on my new story🥰)

Okay, my Episode family :purple_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
I need help with my Description for my new story, “Shot in the Dark.”
The story is about a girl named, “Iris.”
She’s the daughter of a mobster, Iris ends up going to a bar with her friends. She gets approached by some man and that man happens to be a Vampire and she ends up getting turned that night because she didn’t want whatever he was thinking. now she has to figure out how to keep it a secret not to mention try to stay out of trouble.

Any suggestions?:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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The daughter of a mobster gets turned into a vampire, how will she fair now that her teeth are fangs and her hunger is no longer for food, but that of blood?


One night is all it takes to change Iris’ life, the transition from being human to a creature of the night. Can she keep her fangs at bay and her hunger tamed?


One night is all it takes to change Iris’ life, the transition from being human to a creature of the night. Now, she has to pretend to be human… but for how long?


One night in the dark changed Iris forever and now she must control her power, deny her fangs and control her lust for blood.


Don’t know if you like any of these? But I just woke up and I tried. :joy:🤷

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Lol you’re all good hun,:purple_heart: They all sound good :blush: thank you for your help I’ll credit you on the description I use.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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You’re welcome! :relaxed:

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