ive thought of that but i feel like its too expected idk
Maybe the assassin can have a hit/bounty on their head? I wouldn’t say this uncommon, but it’s a nice twist.
id consider that but the thing is- there’s abt 9 mc’s thatre all assassins-
Hmm, interesting, what if you make one of the nine assassins be the reason why one of them has a hit on their head? Maybe one of them got in the way of something they were doing or since you mentioned comedy, the bounty could be a joke gone wrong.
Someone put it on the dark web “if someone kills this person on sight, you’ll get 50 million,” but it was meant to be a joke, but because it’s the dark web someone is really after them messing up their missions.
Lol, idk, but that was fun to write.
what do you think would be a good desc for that?
Are they assassins for a certain cause and thinking they’re doing the right thing?
If so, it would be interesting if what we consider as “good” later in the story appears to be really bad/damaging so that the assassins have to question what they are doing. (Maybe cliche haha)
most of them are assassins for a certain cause, do you want the reasons why each of them became an assassin?
Sure! And who is the MC? All nine?
Hahaha, no problem! I wish I could help, but I am terrible at descriptions
I think you should explain the plot before you ask for ideas on how to twist it?
yup, all nine.
Athena Elyssa Sanchez and Everett Adair Sanchez- they used to be in a gang but they got caught n instead of jus killing people for no reason, they thought itd b better if they did it if the person did something bad
Kairo Dawson Zahnt- his sister is a cop, he became an assassin because his dad used to be an assassin too n died on the job but his sister is covering for him, he also used to be an underground fighter
Kamilah De Luca (she’s the most important out of the 9) - she became an assassin because her mom died on the job too n she wanted to b like her n her dad is the Dean’s assistant
Levi Huxley- he started off as just a fitness trainer for assassins but eventually became one
Marco Ortega n Milan Ortega- they jus thought they had enough smarts n balls to do it so they just went for it, marco specializes in hacking n techy stuff like locating stuff thats hard to locate n hack into specific thingss n milan specializes in weapons
Yara Knox- she used to b a shooting trainer for the police academy but one time she got kinda outta hand n had a breakdown n accidentally shot a police so that kinda fucked her up but theres no specific reason she became an assassin
Diana Arrsen- teenage pregnancy, her kid got shot when her kid was 5 n she just wanted revenge n she thought the safest way in hopes to ffind the killer was ig becoming as assassin
thats the thing, i havent really figured out a final plot, i might (i need to tweak it cus i have to have an original idea) have @xxLoveAaliyah’s idea as a plot then have something else as a plot twist
Holy shit, you have nine MCs, of course you’re stuck, that is really ambitious. You basically need nine separate plot lines, are you sure you want that many?
Interesting! I’ll try think about something, but will be absent for a while to study.
(And the idea @xxloveaaliyah had sounds good!)
yup- i tweaked the plot aaliyah had n this is the plot im sTicKInG to:
so basically, what she said abt the bounty stuff but its placed only on one assassin’s head so the other 8 are kinda acting as her bodyguards now-
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It was all a dream?
Good news: I don’t have to study for exams anymore
Bad news: I haven’t come up with any ideas
I think that what you have right now is good without my help XD
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