Hey ppl, i’m new at writing and i’m struggling with keeping a good structure and sequence of scenes in my story so i’d like it to be readed and if you could give me your opinion to make it better.
Also, i gotta say that i can proofread too, specially when it comes to grammar
BTW MY STORY LINK IS:
I’m reading Little Demons. Check it out: Episode Writer Portal
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