I need review on this scene

So, I am working on a story and I’m trying to tell it as visually as I can. Do you like it? And if you don’t can I do something to make it better?

SORRY FOR THE LOW QUALITY GIF

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I love it!!! :heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

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i like it

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Lol I really like it!

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I like it, but I think his hands are switched. Like the thumbs are facing up for the dude

shit you are right. i just noticed!

haha thanks for telling me

Well to me it looks weird, his arms must be like really long and ?? Idk, but there’s something that doesn’t please me and I can’t really say, else this is a good idea I like when stories use overlays to make it more visually enjoyable !

yeah i know what you mean. i’m thinking of removing them actually… 'cause i don’t also like the non-smoothness that they have, even though i tried every single easing function