I need reviews on my intro!

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 6:47pm

Hello guys so I need som reviews on my intro! Because when I ask some people to review my intro they ignore me…so I’m asking the public!

I don’t care if you have something bad to say just give me your honest opinion!

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 6:47pm

Bump!

Unique_911 · September 10, 2018, 7:25pm

I named my character tester and My character name was then rain.

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 7:26pm

Lol.

Unique_911 · September 10, 2018, 7:27pm

Oh, and The thing at the beginning wasn’t really needed.

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 7:27pm

What thing?

Unique_911 · September 10, 2018, 7:29pm

English wasn’t my first language and I don’t have an ig.

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 7:30pm

Ok…
But it’s true

Unique_911 · September 10, 2018, 7:34pm

You don’t need it but it’s your opinion.

Firely_epi · September 10, 2018, 7:37pm

Ok…

Unique_911 · September 10, 2018, 7:37pm

Ko…