I did some coding on this scene but it’s a little choppy, can anyone fix it? Its kinda long but it’s mostly just repetition so it’s not that complicated.
Script
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right
@HAZEL PK 3 is dustoff_loop
@HAZEL PK 3 changes into UNIFORM_pk_3
@HAZEL PK 3 is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Like a broken record, the past 13 years of my life have been stuck on repeat.
@transition fade out white .7
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right and BC1 stands screen right and BC1 faces left
@HAZEL PK 3 is laugh_giggle and BC1 is laugh_chuckle
@transition fade out white .7
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL PK 3 is applaud_loop and MILLIE is laugh_giggle
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL 3 6 changes into UNIFORM_3_6
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 192 45 to 127% in 0
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is yawn_bored
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is idle
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 3 6 is yawn_bored and MILLIE is talk_greet
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
The days repeating until they became dreadfully irritating.
@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll_subtle
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll_subtle and MILLIE is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Then, tiring.
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL 7 9 changes into UNIFORM_7_9
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_exhausted
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad and MILLIE is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
After 13 years, I realized the broken record, would never change.
@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad and MILLIE is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I couldn't expect something that has been the same for over a decade to change on its own.
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL changes into UNIFORM_7_9
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry and MILLIE is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I had to do something different.
@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry
@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry
@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY
@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL is deepbreath
volume music 0 4000
@HAZEL is arms_crossed and MILLIE is idle_happy
NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I had to be the change.
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .3
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom reset
@HAZEL stands screen center
@HAZEL changes into HAZEL_default
@pause for a beat
@HAZEL is deepbreath