I need Script/coding help!

I did some coding on this scene but it’s a little choppy, can anyone fix it? Its kinda long but it’s mostly just repetition so it’s not that complicated.

Script

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right
@HAZEL PK 3 is dustoff_loop
@HAZEL PK 3 changes into UNIFORM_pk_3
@HAZEL PK 3 is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Like a broken record, the past 13 years of my life have been stuck on repeat.

@transition fade out white .7
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right and BC1 stands screen right and BC1 faces left
@HAZEL PK 3 is laugh_giggle and BC1 is laugh_chuckle

@transition fade out white .7
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL PK 3 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL PK 3 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL PK 3 is applaud_loop and MILLIE is laugh_giggle

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL 3 6 changes into UNIFORM_3_6
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 192 45 to 127% in 0

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is yawn_bored

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is idle

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 3 6 is yawn_bored and MILLIE is talk_greet

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
The days repeating until they became dreadfully irritating.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll_subtle

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL 3 6 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 3 6 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 3 6 is eyeroll_subtle and MILLIE is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
Then, tiring.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL 7 9 changes into UNIFORM_7_9
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_exhausted

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad and MILLIE is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
After 13 years, I realized the broken record, would never change.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL 7 9 spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL 7 9 faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL 7 9 is idle_sad and MILLIE is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I couldn't expect something that has been the same for over a decade to change on its own.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@HAZEL changes into UNIFORM_7_9
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry and MILLIE is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I had to do something different.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@HAZEL is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@HAZEL spot 1.158 165 -40 and HAZEL faces right
@MILLIE spot 1.280 296 3 and MILLIE faces left
@HAZEL is deepbreath
volume music 0 4000
@HAZEL is arms_crossed and MILLIE is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEL)
I had to be the change.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .3
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@zoom reset
@HAZEL stands screen center
@HAZEL changes into HAZEL_default
@pause for a beat

@HAZEL is deepbreath

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I’m trying but your characters name are quite confusing :sweat_smile:

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Is BC1 a man or a female?

Yeah I know, sorry about that. I’ll try to make it more simple

I hope this makes more sense. The teacher is female and so is the main characters. The names of the outfits don’t matter, I just put outfit bc the names of them are confusing.

Summary

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is dustoff_loop
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
Like a broken record, the past 13 years of my life have been stuck on repeat.

@transition fade out white .7
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right and TEACHER stands screen right and TEACHER faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is laugh_giggle and TEACHER is laugh_chuckle

@transition fade out white .7
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is applaud_loop and MOM is laugh_giggle

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 192 45 to 127% in 0

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is yawn_bored

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is yawn_bored and MOM is talk_greet

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
The days repeating until they became dreadfully irritating.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY
@zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll_subtle

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll_subtle and MOM is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
Then, tiring.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_exhausted

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad and MOM is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
After 13 years, I realized the broken record, would never change.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad and MOM is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
I couldn't expect something that has been the same for over a decade to change on its own.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed_angry and MOM is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (HAZEMAIN CHARACTERL)
I had to do something different.

@transition fade out white .1
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed_angry

@transition fade out white .1
INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 and MAIN CHARACTER faces right
@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 and MOM faces left
@MAIN CHARACTER is deepbreath
volume music 0 4000
@MAIN CHARACTER is arms_crossed and MOM is idle_happy

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
I had to be the change.

@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .1
@transition fade in white .1
@transition fade out white .3
INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@zoom reset
@MAIN CHARACTER stands screen center
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT
@pause for a beat

@MAIN CHARACTER is deepbreath

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Is the teacher a man?

What exactly are you needing help with? Is the transition in/out choppy? The animations? What?

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The transition looks choppy to me, but i dont know how to fix it.

female

Add a . or a ! after the YAS

You, you are a god. thank you sm

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INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 152 82 to 100% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.870 169 156 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND MAIN CHARACTER is dustoff_neutral_loop

@pause for 1.8

@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT

@pause for 0.5

&MAIN CHARACTER is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
&zoom on 152 82 to 155% in 2.5

@speechbubble is 165 328 to 100%
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
Just like a broken record, the past 13 years of my life have been stuck on repeat.

@transition fade out white 0.7

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 320 277 to 136% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

&zoom on 320 277 to 100% in 0.3

@MAIN CHARACTER is laugh_giggle AND TEACHER is laugh_chuckle

@transition fade out white 0.7

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 320 189 to 155% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 in zone 1 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is applaud_happy_loop AND MOM is laugh_giggle

@transition fade out white 0.1
@transition fade in white 0.1
@transition fade out white 0.1
@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 192 45 to 127% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is yawn_bored

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 268 96 to 100% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle AND TEACHER is talk_think_neutral

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 320 189 to 155% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is yawn_bored AND MOM is talk_greet_neutral

@speechbubble is 177 214 to 100%
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
The days repeated until they became dreadfully irritating.

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll_sarcastic

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 320 185 to 137% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll_subtle AND TEACHER is talk_explain_neutral

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 320 189 to 155% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is eyeroll_sarcastic AND MOM is talk_gossip

    NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
Then later on, tiring.

@transition fade out white 0.1
@transition fade in white 0.1
@transition fade out white 0.1

@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_exhausted_loop

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 320 185 to 137% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad_serious_loop AND TEACHER is talk_excited_happy

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 320 189 to 155% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad_serious_loop AND MOM is talk_handsonhips_neutral_loop

&zoom on 170 160 to 229% in 1.5

@speechbubble is 165 226 to 100%
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
After 13 years, I realized the broken record, would never change.

######SUGGESTION{

@speechbubble is 165 226 to 100%

NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)

# And after 13 year, I had it.

@speechbubble is 165 226 to 100%

NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)

# This record has been playing the same music long enough.

@speechbubble is 165 226 to 100%

NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)

# I've finally realized that it would never change.

#######}

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad_serious_loop

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 268 142 to 163% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

&zoom on 208 49 to 182% in 1

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad_serious_loop AND TEACHER is talk_armsraised_neutral

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 214 153 to 186% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_sad_serious_loop AND MOM is talk_exclaim_yes_happy

@speechbubble is 163 214 to 100%
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
I couldn’t expect something that has been the same for over a decade to change on its own.

@transition fade out white 0.1
@transition fade in white 0.1
@transition fade out white 0.1

@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 268 96 to 171% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND TEACHER is talk_reassure_neutral

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 214 153 to 186% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

&MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND MOM is talk_flirt_smile_lookaway

@speechbubble is 169 209 to 100%
NARRATOR (HAZEMAIN CHARACTERL)
I had to do something different.

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

&zoom on 153 107 to 191% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.901 161 95 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY

&zoom on 268 96 to 171% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND TEACHER stands screen right AND TEACHER faces left

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND TEACHER is talk_greet_shy

@transition fade out white 0.1

INT. ANNIKA APARTMENT 2 - DAY

&zoom on 214 153 to 186% in 0

@MAIN CHARACTER spot 1.158 165 -40 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right

@MOM spot 1.280 296 3 AND MOM faces left AND MOM is talk_think_neutral

@MAIN CHARACTER is deepbreath

volume music 0 4000

@MAIN CHARACTER is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND MOM is talk_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 154 218 to 100%
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER)
I had to be the change.

@transition fade out white 0.1
@transition fade in white 0.1
@transition fade out white 0.1
@transition fade in white 0.1
@transition fade out white 0.3

INT. JUVIE WELLES BEDROOM - DAY

@MAIN CHARACTER changes into OUTFIT

&zoom on 152 82 to 155% in 0

&MAIN CHARACTER spot 0.870 169 156 in zone 1 AND MAIN CHARACTER faces right AND MAIN CHARACTER is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@MAIN CHARACTER is deepbreath

Let me know if I need to changes something.

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Thank you so much I haven’t previewed it yet, but it looks great and thanks for the suggestions :slight_smile: I was planning it on changing it to:

“it’s all the same. My life is a never-ending loop, and I’m tired of it. For a while, I pleaded for something new, but nothing changed. Like a broken record, the past 13 years of my life have been stuck on repeat. The days would repeat until they became dreadfully irritating, and then tiring. After 13 long years, it suddenly hit me, the broken record would never change. I can’t sit and wait for something that’ll never happen. I need to be the change .”

But I love the line

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