I need second opinions!

I have a story idea, and would love some feedback. Here it is:

A commoner has always envied the princess, as the other girls have as well. Soon a prince is arranged to marry the princess. The prince falls in love with the commoner, and the day before the wedding he discovers that the princess isn’t really the princess. He and the commoner uncover that the commoner is in fact the lost princess, and the current princess has been using magic spells to keep herself young forever.

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I like it! If you ever make a poll regarding your story tag me!

totally awesome n ill check it out!

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