I need serious help


#1

im doing it wrong need help please

INT. MALL BOUTIQUE - DAY

@zoom reset

@MANNEQUIN3 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 2 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN3 faces left

@MANNEQUIN4 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN4 faces left

@MANNEQUIN5 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN5 faces left

@MANNEQUIN3 starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@MANNEQUIN4 starts talk_primp_neutral

@MANNEQUIN5 starts talk_gossip

@MANNEQUIN6 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 3 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN6 faces left

@MANNEQUIN7 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 3 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN7 faces left

@MANNEQUIN8 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN8 faces left

@MANNEQUIN6 starts talk_sad_timid_loop

@MANNEQUIN7 starts think_rubchin

@MANNEQUIN8 starts talk_agree_happy

@SKYLAR enters from left to upscreen left

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 2

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1

    SKYLAR (talk_agree_happy)
Which one do you like the best?

    CECILIA3 (think_rubchin)
(Hmm...)
(Let's take a closer look.)

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

label swimsuit

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (swimsuit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto swimsuit

}
“Choose swimsuit”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto swimsuit

}

label swimsuit1

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (swimsuit1)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto swimsuit2

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto swimsuit2

}
“Choose swimsuit3”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit3

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (swimsuit4)
“Next outfit -->”{

@pan to zone 3 in 0.5

goto swimsuit4

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit2

}
“Choose swimsuit5”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label swimsuit5

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit5

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@pan to zone 2 in 0.5

goto outfit3

}
“Choose swimsuit6”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label swimsuit6

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 960 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto swimsuit7

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit4

}
“Choose swimsuit7”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit6

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit5

}
“Choose swimsuit8”{

    NARRATOR

This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

@cut to zone 1

@zoom reset

    SKYLAR (talk_shrug_concerned)
Are you sure?

    CECILIA3
...

choice
“Yep, I’m sure”{

    CECILIA3 (talk_agree_happy)
Yep, I'm sure.

}
“Let me take another look”{

    CECILIA3 (talk_unsure)
Let me take another look.

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

goto label_outfit

}

    CECILIA3 (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I'm gonna get changed into it right now.

@CECILIA3 exits right

@transition fade out black 1

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

@pause for a beat

INT. MALL BOUTIQUE - DAY

@SKYLAR stands upscreen left in zone 1 AND SKYLAR faces right

@transition fade in black 1

@CECILIA3 stands screen center in zone 2

if (outfit is “Choose swim”){

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit

}elif (outfit is “swimsuit1”){

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit1

}elif (outfit is “swimsuit3”){

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit3

}elif (outfit is “swimsuit4”){

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit4

}elif (outfit is “swimsuit5”){

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit5

}else{

@CECILIA3 changes into swimsuit6

}

@CECILIA3 enters from right to screen right

@CECILIA3 is idle

below is where i got the code

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY

@zoom reset

@MANNEQUIN3 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 2 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN3 faces left

@MANNEQUIN4 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN4 faces left

@MANNEQUIN5 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN5 faces left

@MANNEQUIN3 starts talk_handsonhips

@MANNEQUIN4 starts primp_condescend

@MANNEQUIN5 starts talk_gossip

@MANNEQUIN6 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 3 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN6 faces left

@MANNEQUIN7 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 3 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN7 faces left

@MANNEQUIN8 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN8 faces left

@MANNEQUIN6 starts talk_sad_clutch

@MANNEQUIN7 starts think

@MANNEQUIN8 starts talk_exclaim_yes

@SKYLAR enters from left to upscreen left

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 2

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1

    SKYLAR (talk_happy_smile)
Which one do you like the best?

    CECILIA3 (think)
(Hmm...)
(Let's take a closer look.)

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

label outfit1

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit2

}
“Choose outfit 1”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit2

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit3

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit1

}
“Choose outfit 2”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit3

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@pan to zone 3 in 0.5

goto outfit4

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit2

}
“Choose outfit 3”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit4

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit5

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@pan to zone 2 in 0.5

goto outfit3

}
“Choose outfit 4”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit5

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 960 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit6

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit4

}
“Choose outfit 5”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label outfit6

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto outfit5

}
“Choose outfit 6”{

    NARRATOR (CECILIA3)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label chose_dress

@cut to zone 1

@zoom reset

    SKYLAR (talk_shrug)
Are you sure?

    CECILIA3
...

choice
“Yep, I’m sure”{

    CECILIA3 (talk_happy_smile)
Yep, I'm sure.

}
“Let me take another look”{

    CECILIA3 (talk_think)
Let me take another look.

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

goto outfit1

}

    CECILIA3 (talk_handsonhips)
I'm gonna get changed into it right now.

@CECILIA3 exits right

@transition fade out black 1

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

@pause for a beat

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY

@SKYLAR stands upscreen left in zone 1 AND SKYLAR faces right

@transition fade in black 1

@CECILIA3 stands screen center in zone 2

if (outfit is “Choose outfit 1”){

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit1

}elif (outfit is “Choose outfit 2”){

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit2

}elif (outfit is “Choose outfit 3”){

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit3

}elif (outfit is “Choose outfit 4”){

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit4

}elif (outfit is “Choose outfit 5”){

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit5

}else{

@CECILIA3 changes into CECILIA3_outfit6

}

@CECILIA3 enters from right to screen right

@CECILIA3 is curtsey


#2

What seems to be the problem? Do you have any errors popping up?
:star2:


#3

yes a lot of errors


#4

all the labels is a error


#5

errorerror1

its an error for each one


#6

Hi.
Start by following the error messages and see how many you can solve that way. For instance I’ve already found the swimsuit2 one and it’s correct that the label’s never used.
To make it easier to locate the words you can hit CTRL + F on your keyboard and search for them a bit quicker.
If you haven’s solved the issue later I can take a propper look at it, but I’m afraid I don’t have the time right now.

<3


#7

thats why i post it here

i kept going thru every single one and couldnt figure it out

i fixed a lot since most of the actions didnt go with the limelight one etc


#8

if its not goto swimsuit#

then what do i put thats what i cant figure out


#9

can anyone help me i cant fix this still


#10

Ok. Let’s see if I can take a look now. To recreate your script I need to know one thing real quick.
How many swimsuits do your try out? I’m not sure if it’s 8 or 9.
Do you have one mannequin for each?

<3


#11

6 mannequins and 6 outfits
swimsuit
swimsuit1
2,3,4,5


#12

I think I’ve found some errors.

  1. At first choice, shouldn’t it be goto swimsuit1(?) not back to swimsuit. That would create a loop…
  2. At the second choice, your using goto swimsuit2 for both going back and forward, meaning label swimsuit is never used when going backward…(?)
  3. EVREKA! I think you’ve accidently named the intended labels for some of the swimsuits to outfit, creating doubble labels. !!!???
  4. I’ve found 8 swimsuit labels :weary:

I’ll continue to add up what I find by changing this post.

PS: Sorry for previous error misstake, it’s passed midnight here so I’m starting to zoon out from time to time :rofl:


#13

It’s ok it’s super confusing


#14

Yeah, I’m sorry but I’m getting really confused.
Do you think you could explain how you’ve intended the scene to play out. I can’t play through it beacuse of the errors.
It the girl trying out first a swimsuit, then a dress or are they all mixed together?
I tried to put all labeled swimsuit after each other, and that’s when I found the doubble labels.


#15

When I get home I will send it to you. She’s at a mall and there’s mannquines lined up. And they are dressed up with one swim suit. You chose which one and Cecilia changes into that one


#16

I got the codes from a episode site


#17

Ok, maybe someone’s tried to copy Joseph Evans. Not very succesfully I might add.
There’s labels all over the place, and they carry to many names to keep track of all.
If someone put this up as a template then that person should feel ashamed. :rage:
But I’ll soon have it fixed up.


#18

That’s where I got it. It also says create where it makes the code but it was for ink so I had to change some stuff but yeah too many people. Took me awhile to make the mannquines


#19

Yeah, before I got that it was for LL and not INK - that’s a story of its own :upside_down_face:
Had to change a few animations as well, but now there’s no more errors.
Don’t think the clothing references will work as they are now though…

I’ll just play through it and check…


#20

Okie