I need some beta readers for my upcoming story!

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Hey!! So if you don’t know me, hi I’m Lia :grin::wave:

I have been working on my upcoming story Blow Up My Life for a while now and I think I am finally at the point where I should start finding some beta readers to give me some feedback on my plot idea, coding, etc.

So I am looking for about 10-15 beta readers who are brutally honest and will give me constructive criticism on my story. Seriously. I do not want any nice, sugar-coating reviewers for this since I want my story to be the best that it can be :joy:

So here are some details on my story if you are interested

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Ok so my story is in LL with a sprinkle of advanced directing and a few art scenes.

This is my first story I’ve actually taken the time to write and plan out (I played around on the portal for a while before I started this so I got used to coding) so I am mainly concerned on the plot and character development

Description: Isa (MC) is the last sorceress on earth after a special-ops group wiped out the rest of her kind. She is 17, and has been on the run on her own since she was 6. She had never stayed in the same place for more than a week, until she meets a boy that flips her world upside down. She realizes that even though she is alive, she is not truly living, so she decides to give herself a break for a few months and hide with Mitchell. She enrolls in high school, and has to learn the social dynamics of an actual school, all while trying to stay undercover. Can she handle the heat??

There is also a major top-secret plot twist that would be explained to the beta readers that I don’t want to spoil for any potential readers :wink:

So… if you are interested let me know and I will make a group chat later with everyone so I can further explain the plot.

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Oh Me!!

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I’m in

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thanks guys!!

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I can do it, i am honest, my rewiew is mostly just my thought while reading, though I when I do rewiew I tend to be more do look more at things more crituqel

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Could I maybe also join in? :sweat_smile:

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I’d be willing to help! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Oooh! The storyline so far reminds me a lot of Maximum Ride. It’s about a ‘family’ of angels who are the last of their kind and they ran away from their testing facility where they were held hostage for testing. They eventually end up enrolling in school in book 2 to try and blend in with kids their age. I’d be interested in beta reading.

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I would def be interested in this!

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bump!

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Your story sounds interesting, I am interested to be a beta reader💕

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