I need some help with my story idea

Hello everyone!

I want to create a story, and I have an idea, but I need feedback.


One night changed his life as he had just walked into something that he might never get out of. “Witches,” he whispered. He had never met one and hoped it would stay that way.

Sorry for it being blurred and crossed out, I just want to make sure no one steals it.

If you have feedback, please let me know in a PM or here!



Can you give more details? Or do you have a specific topic about your story that you want advice/opinions on? :kissing_smiling_eyes:

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Sure! What would you like more details on?

I know the idea is not that great and detailed. That is also why I am looking for help.

Well, honestly, it’s just the idea I need help improving.

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Anyone have any feedback? I want to improve it but I don’t know how I can.

Can you maybe tell me more about the MC, his backstory, witches in your story, ect…? Just honestly tell me everything about your idea and I’ll see what I can help with!

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I actually got help in a PM but thank you!

@Sydney_H or @Nick please close this!


Closed by OP request. :smiley: