I think it looks good as it your first time which we will keep in mind I like how you used the shading and tried to do hair lines but when drawing you should be aware (if you didn’t know already) to try and not keep everything on one layer it helps to use multiple layers (which I’m saying from experience) as it easier to get rid of parts while drawing and not messing up the rest also if your using ibis paint try to use the darker shades before the lighter colours to blend to give you an effective look to shading hair parts, face or even clothes😊
Also don’t think I’m being rude or anything just wanna help bc I been here too 