I need someone to give me feedback on my story!

I just published episode 9 of my new story, “The Ember Moon Pack”, and I’ve made a couple of directing changes and have somewhat increased the length and choices in the story. If anyone would like to send me feedback on the episode, please PM me! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Name: The Ember Moon Pack


Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 8 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight


Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:


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