I need someone to review my story “Let Me Assist Your Love”

I need someone to review all three of my episodes and tell me what can I do better :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Here the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4626297877889024

Ok so, there’s some small spelling errors and the story is moving a little fast because I’m not really grasping what the chapters are about but, slowing it down and taking some time to revise and edit should do it but other than that it’s a good story!

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Wait can you tell me the spelling errors cause I swear there wasn’t any​:sob::sob:

Honestly just a couple here and there in every chapter.

Awe thank you I will definitely watch out for that

No problem !

If you want I can check:

  • errors
  • plot
  • character development
  • sub-plots
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Yess, please!!

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I’ll get started as soon as I can!

Okay, thanks

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