I Need Story Advice (INK)

Hmm…well what if the girl mafia is working as a waitress or a bartender for spent reason but suddenly a customer comes in and it’s the guy mafia and recognizes the girl and says something like hey fiancé and she denies it and gets angry but then goes back to her house and asks her dad only to find out it’s true.

It’s just an idea. I’m not good with ideas