i want to do a really good mafia/gang/arms dealer story like its just an illusion/chain reaction/huntingbad/burning desire all rolled into one story but obvs not copying the stories
any advice on how to do this?
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Just don’t romanticize toxic and abusive relationships between the LI and the MC, we have way too many stories like that.
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no abuse will happen in my stories killing bad guys yes but rape and abuse are a big NO NO for me
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So I’ve never read those stories so I’m not sure how much help I’ll be, but I think that having unique and well developed characters is really important. From there it’s really easy to create a unique storyline. Also the way you have the MC introduced to the mafia in the first episode is something you can get really creative with.
I do not mean it bad but I would recomand you to fing something more original. This stories copy one from another and when you read 5-6 of them you realise the plost is all over the same in them and it started to be a big cliche.
I as you I liked them on start.now I cant read such stories anymore, because even if writen good thay do not bing anything new.
If you want be new makethe girlnot fall for mob - making gansters mobs killers and drug dealers look like the ideal partner is actually in a way sick in my openion.
End of the day it’s just a story it’s not sick at all love is love doesn’t matter if it’s with a drug dealer or a particular criminal I’m not romancing the toxic relationships I’m actually doing a story about a cop and a mafia leader in a forbidden relationship not a toxic one and yes their is killing in my story like every one else’s stories
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Write what you are inspired to write. Dont change your plan based on what others say. 
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