I Review Stories! 😊 [CLOSED]

Hey there, :slight_smile:
I currently revamped my first episodes again and I would love to get a feedback on it! I already check my grammar with a program but I would love if you could especially point out grammatical mistakes… I would highly appreciate it :slight_smile:

My details:
My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Adventure
Episodes : 14 (going on)
Style: Ink
Description:
Always standing up for each other through thick and thin, that’s what these twins are about. Will they master to face the intrigues, the chaos and mysteries together? Trouble ahead.
Link: [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334870588784640 ]

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