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#1

Hey guys! I think Episode is such a great platform for young writers to share their creations, and I don’t know about you but it bugs me to no end when I read stories that have such creative plots and characters, but don’t get enough credit because they have annoying writing issues. I want to help make your stories the best they can be, and not let grammar, spelling, or trouble writing hold your stories back from being featured. Reply to this thread or message me with a story link if you’d like me to edit your story!


#2

I’ll be bookmarking this as I haven’t finished with my story, but I’ll send it over here when it’s done! :heart:


#3

@Janeger
I realized I need to published episode 5 and I’m not finished with it at all…
I’m super sorry for wasting your time…


#4

Could you review mine?


#5

Author: Anonymous Author
Story: Hale Huna
Description: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Cover: cover
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5002839252664320
Please keep in mind:
-This story contains strong language and mature themes and tackles real life situations such as mental illness and sexual abuse, however it is not a big focus, more of a back story.
-I am waiting on my own backgrounds and personal splashes to be reviewed

Thanks a lot!


#6

Would you mind reading the first three chapters of mine? They’re not terribly long… I want to continue it but don’t know if it’s worth it…

Title: Fantastical: Borealis (planning on taking out the Fantastical: if I ever update the story)
Author: Epithet
Description: A king and queen welcome their gifted princess into the world under the eyes of rival fairy queens, unleashing a powerful revolutionary.
Genre: Fantasy
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5135666028871680


#7

Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Author Name: Briana M.
Number of Episodes: 14 ~ONGOING~
Plot: Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5716365262585856
Instagram: @brianam.stories


#12

I will definitely review your story but I need you to send me a share link so I can read it without using my passes. Pm it to me please.


#13

Hi, @Janeger! Thanks for creating this thread! It`d be great if you check my story.
Story title: Let the demon inside
Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504



#14

Hey, I’d like to get a review!
Name of story: No changes after a year…
Name of Author: Teddy’s Dollhouse
Genre: Drama, Romance, Comedy
Style: INK
Episodes: 2
Description: Zen had a beautiful childhood until he was 10 years old with his father but after meeting a beautiful women who claims to be his true mother everything changes.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6385627538259968


#15

My story: SWEET PERFECTION
Author: Shweta Mehra
Genre: Romance
Story style: Ink
Description: After breaking up, Sierra moves on to a happy single life, but what happens when she falls for “THE NERD” and her ex coming back to her life. CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @shweta_episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5947516399779840

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#16

Hey!
Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.

Romance/Mystery/Comedy.

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 7 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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Want updates on this story? Here’s the update thread!


#17

Hi there!
Thank you for creating this thread! If you are still accepting requests, I’d love if you could check out my story and give me some feedback. Here are the details:
Title: Lie to Me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664


#18

Tittle : Search For love
Author: Sigma.fr
Genre: Drama
Instagram: Sigma.fr.writes
Episodes : 5 (more coming soon)
Description: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128

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