So I am almost ready to publish my story but now I am thinking about my charaters, I have four girls right now and I want to start a new chapter with only two perspetives and then in one chapter add them all together. Am I doing to much because I dont want my story to be all over the place but I do want my readers to understand my story from four different people.
Do whatever you think is best. If you’re really worried, there are tons of story reviewers here you can submit it to so they can say (from a reader’s point of view) what they think.
Ok thanks … I will definitely be looking for reviewers just after episode approves my backgrounds.