I want general feedback on my story

I have published a new story called The Star Necklace I would appreciate any feedback to my story

I am happy to listen to your opinions!

Title: The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

I started it let me read more in a little bit. Will, you review my book yes, a real book for me in return? PM if you want me to review your story in return for reading my book.

If you still want feedback visit my thread (I don’t do read for read) Olu's review thread (OPEN)

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