So I have gone back and added color, flash, and bold to some or the words in my first chapter. I also have gone back and added sound and fixed some spelling! What I would like to know is would any one like to read the first chapter (because its free and haven’t done the rest yet) and tell me what you think of it. The sound the words, just every thing.
Thank you Title Alone Till There Was You ByBethany Cover
AboutSummer is a single mom of two twins and life has not always been the best to her. But when Spencer comes into her life things start to get better, but what happen’s when she finds out who he really is? Linkhttp://episodeinteractive.com/s/6668287837339648
Only my first Chapter will have all the changes on it (sound and flashing words, colored words, underlined words, and bold words) do it you read more then Chapter one it will be different, (not the story or directing) Also I have not fixed all my grammar in the other chapters. Just want to let you know. But you are more then welcome to just read Chapter one and give me truthful thoughts on it please! I will go start your story now…
The cover I made for you
I really like it I will be reading more. It is good. I wanted to Hug Travis when he was being bulled and I love how Ray is with them. I will be reading more. I love Konan,
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Here is the description of my story :
Title : Paradise Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 12 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736
For far I like it. Just a few side notes. Just a few words misspelled. Also I am a single mother of one and her age and her babies…I do like it. Haha though part of me disagrees but I do have no room to talk. I do like it. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way. Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music
I did. But Chapter one has more of the words that are bold, flash, and colored. I want back and added music to chapters but i’m not very good at that. lol and thank you.