I will read and review your story

Since my school will be closed for the time being I thought that I might as well do some reviews. As a writer myself, I know how much difference some honest feedback can be when you’re writing a story.
I’m studying screenwriting at university and has been doing so for the past two years so I do have some experience when it comes to structuring stories. So if someone out there is struggling with their story I might be able to use my expertise to help you figure out what’s not working in your story. Of course, if you’re not struggling and just want to know what I think about it, you can also request a review.

I’m also doing this for the selfish reason of finding new and great stories to read.

My main focus will be plot, character and story structure. Since my native language isn’t English I will not be too hard with grammar unless it’s really really bad. I will read all chapters that have been published but if it’s a long story it will obviously take longer time to get a review.

Just write the details of your story down below and I will get back to you soon.


Hey, I am interested in your review.
Title the Red Curtain (male MC, LGBTQ+)
Genre Drama
Author Grottino
Chapter 7 so far
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4624881377148928

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Hello! I’d be interested in a review when/if you have some time😊

Magicka: Within Her Soul
Author: KylieJay
IG: @princesskjx3
Full CC, some choices matter, LL, 3 episodes with more coming soon…

Just when she’s at her breaking point, Lucy stumbles across a world on the verge of war and everyone expects her to save them. Can she restore peace on Charkana and within herself?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5867673552224256

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Hey there! Thank you for this opportunity!

Title: Pathway to Realiy
Author: Victoriaecs
Genre: Horror
Number of Episodes: 10 (ongoing)

Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6633320245690368
Cover art:

I would like a review :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Here is my story!

Hope you like it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Here’s mine! :two_hearts:

Title: Blackbird
Author: Licorice
Genre: Action
Summary: Being her personal assistant isn’t the only thing Chase’s new boss has in mind for him. Secrets of the underworld begin to unveil, and not everything is exactly as it seems. (Male & female MC, point system, impactful choices)
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)

Link: https://bit.ly/365yrLB
Instagram: @licorice.writes

Title: Gold Leaf High
Author: MTB
Genre: drama
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5607706151944192

Hi can you please do mine? (It’s not published yet)

Title: Who’s Who?
Author: Tay11
Episodes: 2 (so far)
Gnere: Drama
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5915374336671744

Hey, I would also like a review if you can do :blush:

Title: Two Paths
Author: Passion
Description: When Elena, an aspiring doctor, meets Lucas, a gangster with a rough past, it’s clear they’re opposites. However, they share the same goal that no one can know about… (CC)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662214484033536

Thanks for the thread!
Here’s mine…

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 7 and ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108744574074880


Thank you for doing this. Here’s my story💓…

Title: Hollywood Dreams
Description: You, an aspiring photographer, follow your long term partner to Hollywood where fame, friendships, lust and betrayal wait for you at every corner. (Full CC, male/female LI, mini games)
Genre: drama/romance
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6551039647219712

Hi! Yeah everyone’s got so much time on their hands now lmao :rofl: here’s my story, I would love to hear your thoughts (it’s only 3 chapters long so) : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5981468249751552

You can always contact me on insta : ashleyswann_episode :smile::smile:

Hello, I would like to know your review🥰
Title: The last breath
Author: ladies.episode
IG: @ladies.episode
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5 (on going)
Descreption:Sibel became a doctor as she dreamed of, but will she leave or continue her career after she was forced to marry a cruel Italian mafia.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4664751502327808

Hi! I’d love to get feedback from you, especially since it comes to plot/storyline.
Here are my story details:
Story: The Prince
Author: Mijhaan
Genre: Romance/Drama/Mystery
Description: He (un)consciously torn her family apart. She never wanted to hear from him again. Sometimes it’s fate… But when it comes to the crown prince of England?
Episodes: 1-14

Your review is done and I have sent it through PM. :smiley:

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Hey, thank you for the thread!
Here’s my story:

Title: Deadly Game
Author: Emma.stories
Genre: Mystery
# of episodes: 7 (8 coming as soon as episode approves my overlay)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5124809218064384
Cover art :

Hey! I’m very much in need of a review and some critique, my friends is getting tired of me always asking for help with my story :sweat_smile:

But! I haven’t started publishing yet, I don’t want to publish until I’m sure I’m pleased with the result. And since I don’t do the coding myself I write in a screenwriting program. Would you consider reviewing my script?

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Haha såg nu att du var svensk dessutom!

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Your review is done. :slight_smile:

Åh kul att det finns andra svenskar här :smiley: Jag läser gärna igenom ditt manus, skicka ett PM så kan vi komma överrens om var du kan skicka det så läser jag det så snart jag bara kan. :slight_smile:

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