Hi everyone,
I have been an episode reader and writer for a few years now and I am interested in reading new and original stories. Use the form below to share your stories and I’ll read them and let you know what I think EDIT: I will heart your comment when I am about to start your story. Please be patient for a response… I will do my best to get to everyone
Title: Author: Genre: # of episodes: Link: Cover art (optional):
I’d love an honest review.
This is my story:
Story Name: DIAMOND’S KEEPER
Author: Tulipsode
Genre: Adventure
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3
Description: Far away in the universe, there is the diamond planet, where the king is hungry for power, will you be able to stop him? (Male MC, CC, Choices matter,+3LI, LGBT+ option)
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5546434510389248
Story Cover:
First things first, your use of overlays and custom backgrounds are amazing! In the beginning when you are customizing the MC, the little panel on the side that helps you customize is super cool and unique. Your directing skills are also fabulous- I’m sure it wasn’t easy to get your characters fly. Also, the scene where the fairies turn into humans was cool. Overall, I don’t have anything bad to say about your story: you have a lot of diverse characters and the plot is intriguing and will keep your readers wanting more. Good job
60 MINUTES AHEAD by Anna
Episodes; 3/ongoing
Genre: Adventure
Style: LL You volunteer to be the first human to test time travel, only going an hour forward with time. But when you leave travel pod, all other humans are gone. CC
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5951939237445632
Cover:
Description: They said your mother was crazy. But they were wrong. She was the only one who saw them coming. The witches are here and they are on a hunt…
Pathway To Reality (review)
Overall, I really like the plot of this story and how it revolves around Toni having strange dreams. It’s very mysterious and using a cliff hanger at the end of the episodes will definitely make your readers want to continue into the next episode. One thing that I think could improve is that there was too much dialogue in the beginning. Perhaps if the characters moved around more or the background changes every once in awhile it would make the story more interesting. Also, I do tend to prefer a story with choices as it keeps readers more interested but I understand that not everyone likes to write that way and thats ok. Great job, keep up the good work
I would love a review my story is not yet published Story Title Breaking Boundaries Description - Noelle, a cheerleader is passionate about football.
She wants to show all the boys that girls have the ability to play football.
Will Noelle be able to break the boundaries?
Episode- I have 3 not finished on last episode
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671208766111744
Thank you so much for this thread! I’d appreciate a review so much when/if you’re able to😊
Title: Magicka: Within Her Soul Author: KylieJay Genre: Fantasy (w/ action, drama, adventure) # of episodes: 3 with more coming soon. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5867673552224256 Cover art (optional):
Blackbird (review):
Yay I loved this one! The beginning starts off super interesting and captured my attention right away which is great! When the camera zoomed out to chase on the roof i was like ! Also, I love how we meet Ivy and that her and chase immediately have chemistry. Plus, your directing skills are fabulous. The scenes where they are climbing the wall/fence are very advanced and clean. The case study at the end of the episode is also creative and interesting.
My suggestions: The very first choice in the beginning of the first episode was too short. I did not have a chance to read through the options. I would either lengthen the time to make a choice or take out some of the options. My second suggestion is to allow some CC in the first episode. I know you use art scenes/overlays so that may make it difficult to allow for CC. Fantastic job! This story deserves to blow up more
Under the Stars (review):
First impression: your cover art is SO cute and it’s definitely going to attract readers. I like that the first episode is all about Jasmin and her struggles. One thing I would suggest is to add another choice in the beginning of the story. The choice towards the end was good too though, I liked how we got to learn more about Jasmin in her past life. Good job