I will review your story! <3 [CLOSED TO CATCH UP]

Hey there! If you need your story to be previewed/reviwed I will gladly read it and give you any pointers or mistakes that I noticed. Just put the title of your story below and I real read it and give you my honest review. :slight_smile:


Hi there! I would love for you to check out my story! :blush: :heart:
Would you be able to read all 10 chapters?

Title: Twisted
Author: Empress
Genre: Mystery/Crime/Romance (a little)
Chapters: 10 (ongoing)
Style: INK
Was I naive… or guilty? Honest… or a liar? Maybe you can be a better judge of it than me. But listen to this story carefully. It’s quite… Twisted.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6469597339189248

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yeah sure I’ll read all chapters if I can. I’ll start right now. :yum:

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Thank you for offering this!

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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I would love a review :slight_smile: , http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5097630993022976 thank you!

hey, I’d love a review!

Story Title: Inner Circle

Author: zapcatini

Instagram: @zapcatini.episode

Genre: DRAMA, romance

Style: Limelight

Episodes: 4 right now, more coming soon!


The lives & lies of rich and famous college students aren’t as glamorous as they appear. Scandal, secrets, love and lust. Can you handle a world where rules don’t exist? CC LGBT

Story Title: Blurred Lines

Author: Ellie

Genre: Romance

Style: Limelight

Episodes: 3, ongoing :slight_smile:

Description: After an intense break up, Quinn enters the world of no strings attached dating. What happens when it turns out there are strings after all, and she’s completely tangled in them?


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833334534668288

Thanks for this thread :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile

Hey just finished reading episode one of Twisted and so far it is beautiful written and has a great story! the only thing I have to say is be carful with apostrophes and making sure you add them. But besides that I do really love this story and for your first story it is incredible!
Examples of missing apostrophes:

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reading adventure: time immune :relaxed:

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Thank you!

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Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying it!! And thank you for letting me know, I’ll try fixing it :blush: :two_hearts:

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Just finished the first episode of time immune and I honestly love the concept and storyline it is so unique! The only thing I have to say is I’m not a fan of spotlight but that it simply my own personal opinion and that is pretty much it :slight_smile: Oh also think about maybe adding more love interests because options are always important :slight_smile:

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Hello!!! Please read mine!!! :blush::blush::blush: I would love to know what you think!

Title: Tender Love
Author: AnaIz16
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 5 (in progress)
Summary: Helena suffers a traumatic loss. A wrong decision was taken. And her dead boyfriend hunts her. The past brings someone who is capable to change her life, w
cc, and choices available!
Style: INK CC
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4831262804410368

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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 4
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover IMG_20190223_164712
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
HAVE a nice reading!

Thank you for your review! I appreciate it :grin:

My story’s name is Fall Girl! I’d really appreciate a review :slight_smile:

Hello! I would love some feedback!
Thank you so much for making yourself available to review stories. :two_hearts:

Title : Crescendo
Style : Limelight
Genre : Adventure (wish I could label my story as Hollywood)
Author : Aurora
Chapters : 7 ( more coming soon)
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4591748300472320
Description : You’re a part of a world famous pop band. Can you balance work, your love life, and friendships or fail at the hands of an abusive ex and the obsessed media?
Features : Full CCs, lots of choices, choices matter, points system

omg i’d love a review! thanks so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.



Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!:blush:

Hi! Really glad if you could review my story :innocent:

Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Genre: Drama/Action
Chapters: 14
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in the way?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5725258112892928
Instagram: xoroses.episode