I will review your story! <33

I really love reading community stories and supporting people! Feel free to drop your story here and I will read it (I will read 2 episodes or more) I will give you an honest review <3

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Thanks for the thread!

Here’s mine…

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6 and ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108744574074880

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Sounds cool I’ll start now :yum:

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I have one more story… Would you like to review that too after this one!!!

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Yeah sure. I might not get to it tonight but I will tomorrow! You can post it now tho.

No problem… Take your time… And let me know your thoughts about both the stories…

Title: Love makes life live {complete}
Author: Roy
Description: A musical love story of Justin & Rhea who goes through love, hate, fame, failure. Will they stay together accepting their success, or will they breakup due to their ego?
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 10 (complete)
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5297404532621312

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So I read 2 chapters and so far the concept and plot for this story seem really interesting and intriguing! One thing though is that I feel you can put more into your sentences for example


There are lots of random periods which makes the sentences seem very choppy. But besides that I think this story is pretty great so I would just keep working on making the sentences a little longer. Also, I find this mechanic sooo cool it was really fun lmao. Also the way the characters get dressed is adorable :joy:. So yeah that’s pretty much it I would definitely read more in the future :blush:

Thank you so much!
Here is my story details

Story - Hidden Marriage (limelight)
description - An simple girl abandoned by her family and she left for 5 years, after returning she tried to achieve everything that she missed with hard struggles.

Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6238359847763968

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Okay so I loveee the spot directing in this! I love the author in the beginning! There are lots of grammar mistakes and I feel it is pretty rushed so far. But besides that I think this is a pretty solid story just go back and spell check a couple things and it should be fine. The use of commas were good and I really love the way the characters look.

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Thank you so much
I’ll improve and I will tell in coming chapters about their relationship, it is just the beginning.

Thank you… I’m glad you liked it… :blush:

I would love a review

My story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

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Yay thank u :hugs:

So my story is called “Invisible love” (I know it’s cliché don’t come at me :sweat_smile:)
Story description: You’re making the same confusing dream since 2 years. But what happens when you realize it might be coming true?

link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6163881573810176

It’s really nice of u tho for doing this

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Do you review unpublished stories? If you do, here are the details:

Name: Secrets
Genre: Mystery
Author SarcasticGenie
Description: When there is a murder at your college, you decide to try to get to the bottom of the mystery gaining an eye witness the police don’t have: the victim.
Episodes: 3/4
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6064535771611136

Thank you so much, and I hope you like it!

Here’s my its unpublished
Name : You’re my Sunshine
Genre: Drama and Romance
Author:Faith Rose
Description: A girl with a learning disability until she meets her Sunshine Nick. CC limited
Episode 1/2
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4514012789538816

Hello I would love a review :smile:
I have 2 stories ;
1)
Name : Heal My Soul


2)
Name : Hopeless Girl

Thank you for this​:two_hearts::two_hearts:

Title: Storm Shield: Destiny Discovery
Author: Ray Edwin
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
Style: LL
Description: Kayla, an advanced homeschooler, just wants a normal life. After acceptance into a prestigious school, will she finally discover normality or is abnormality her fated destiny?
Cover Picture:

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Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5486703935291392
Additional notes: The cover has not yet been approved, so the story will have the default fantasy cover in the app. Once approved, I will update the story. Thanks so much for your time!

I actually have already read quite a bit of this story! I really do enjoy I think its an amazing plot the overlays and backgrounds are great I think obviously people can always improve but I do really love this story :slight_smile: