I would like a review for third story called Breaking boundaries

Hi, I’m working on other story it’s not published yet.
I would like a review any feedback on it and also is this description good?

Description- Noelle, a cheerleader is passionate about football.
She wants to show all the boys that girls have the ability to play football.

Will Noelle be able to break the boundaries?

Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671208766111744



I just finished the first chapter; please PM me if you want a review!

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