Hi guys, its me AGAIN i have asked people on here to read my story quiet a few times and I have improved on it after i have taken on there fedback. I would really like someone who can read my story again a fresh pair of eyes i guess and see if theres anything that i can improve on ETC, I also not sure which genre to put my story into PLEASE HELP!!!
Hiya, thats very odd not sure as too why? here it is again
probably beacuse I’m logged in on my own account. can you share the story link?
sorry i think i gave the wrong link (div I am)
Could you check out mine too pls don’t be angry