Hi guys, its me AGAIN i have asked people on here to read my story quiet a few times and I have improved on it after i have taken on there fedback. I would really like someone who can read my story again a fresh pair of eyes i guess and see if theres anything that i can improve on ETC, I also not sure which genre to put my story into PLEASE HELP!!!
https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/My_name_is_Nicola