I would like someone fedback on my story and would like to know your thoughts on which genre it should be in


#1

Hi guys, its me AGAIN i have asked people on here to read my story quiet a few times and I have improved on it after i have taken on there fedback. I would really like someone who can read my story again a fresh pair of eyes i guess and see if theres anything that i can improve on ETC, I also not sure which genre to put my story into PLEASE HELP!!! :confused:

https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/My_name_is_Nicola


#2

can’t use the link, it will say I don’t have permission


#3

Hiya, thats very odd not sure as too why? here it is again

https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/My_name_is_Nicola


#4

probably beacuse I’m logged in on my own account. can you share the story link?


#5

sorry i think i gave the wrong link :confused: (div I am)


#6

Could you check out mine too pls don’t be angry :no_mouth:


#7