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Hi, I would love you to review my story. I just published it on Sunday but I worked really hard on it.
Only the first 2 episodes are out by the way.

Title: Better on my Own
Author: Joanna Banana
Style: Ink
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Story description: Camila has never needed anyoneā€™s help. Sheā€™s a one woman army. But what happens when she is forced to accept the help of a mysterious guy to accomplish her greatest mission yet?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6447079579582464

Thank you :smile:

Story: Skaiā€™s Stories
Author: Mystery.episode (me)

Hey! Iā€™d love some constructive criticism on my story <3
Title: Subverted
Author: Epithet
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Thank you for taking time to read peoples stories and give them feedback :slight_smile:

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Hi, Iā€™d love a review! Iā€™m always looking forward to improve!
Authorā€™s name: Lady Bird
Story title: The Triangle!

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Hi!
If you want you can read my story. I just published it. It is my first story ever. It now has three episodes. It is far from perfectā€¦ So let me knowā€¦

Name of story: It was just a secret
Authors Name: storiesbyanouk

Title - Midnight Memories
Author - Evija

My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Fantasy/Mystery
Story style: All the 3 episode characters types: LIMELIGHT, INK & ORIGINAL
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before itā€™s too late? CharacterCustomization
How many Episodes to review : 4 (but 3 is alright )
Most proud of my story : The Originality, Diversity and a lot of interesting advanced directing techniques despite being a newbie. No romance.

  • Pitfalls : Definitely your number 3 and 4 :sweat_smile: and also Coming up with plot beforehand. My ideas keep changing.
    Pay most attention to : The plot. If it may be too confusing or anything that I could improve.
    Goal : Is it worth sharing? To know if there are any areas I can improve.
    Inspired from : First, the myths, legends, folktales and lores of the different cultures of Asia (Malay, Chinese, Indian, Thailand and more). Second, the stories of my grandmother when she was a child during the Japanese Occupation in WWII and how she was saved. Third, the cartoon series ā€œAvatar The Last Airbenderā€. Fourth, the sun worshippers in Peru, South America and other similar cultures. Fifth, the lessons at my school: Social Studies, History and Geography. Last, my own homeland: Singapore & Hometown & nearby island of Sentosa.

Is there anything that you should be aware? :
Is my second time publishing a story and first time entering an Episode contest for it (Thriller Contest thus only 5 chapters). Oh yes, the unique and difficult names. The tribe also consists of different coloured people to enhance my meaning of diversity. The tribe is fictitious but inspired by various sources. Some of the languages are in Sumerian, Sanskrit and Babylonian. A little ironic given the story is taken place in East South East Asia.

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TITLE:Emerald Falls
AUTHOR: JJ
GENRE: Thriller (Action and Romance)
STYLE: INK
EPISODES: 8 (Ongoing)
DESCRIPTION: What happens when Good Girls like Bad Boys. Sparks will ignite, and Bullets will fly so strap yourselves in for a ride of Twists, Turns, Murder and Love in Emerald Falls.

I just published my first ever Episode story today, and if youā€™d have time to take a look Iā€™d be really grateful.
Itā€™s called Whatā€™s Your Emergency? by Sathael, about a 999 police radio operator and snarker extraordinaire who might actually find out that the police officer on her team that she hates might not actually be the arsehole she thought he was.
Romance genre. Three episodes published so far. Working on the fifth at the moment.

Hey!! iā€™m Sofia

Iā€™ve just published my story and Iā€™d appreciate if youā€™d possibly have time to check it out :slight_smile:

TITLE; 18 SECONDS
DESCRIPTION: Myana was in an accident that left her blind. Follow her on her epic journey as she discovers her extraordinary gift on her quest to uncover the cold case of her deceased boyfriend
CHAPTERS; 3 ( more coming soon )
AUTHOR; Sofia Taffs (@sofia_episode) instagram handle
STYLE; INK
LINK:* http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5239413285453824

Hi! I would appreciate a review! :heart:

As a young writer, you find inspiration in an unexpected place. Is the hot firefighter you wrote about really just a figment of your imagination? When your book becomes a movie, youā€™ll have to choose: lie or risk losing everything! CC, INK.

This story has two layers, some drama, a lot of romance and humor to keep it balanced.

I published my story yesterday and would like a review please :slight_smile: :heartpulse::two_hearts:

Title: TATYA: Professor Fever
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Drama
Style: INK
Story Description: Tatyas life has been a series of unfortunate events. The only thing keeping her going is her love for law. Will the new hot prof keep her from achieving her goal?
Instagram: @gisellepisode
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Link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5795320466309120

Title name: A spark of hope
Author name: J Mo
Description: It is very hard to enjoy a stress free life when the lover of your past moves back and your bad boy best friend is not okay with it. How will you handle the drama?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5912047137980416
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Genre: Romance
Story Style (INK/Classic/LL): Limelight
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Title: Limitless
Style: Limelight
Genre: Drama
Episodes Released: 3 and more are coming
Description: Arya is in her junior year of high school and she dreams of getting into the most competitive school around, Richmond, but so does everyone else. Read Limitless to follow her through high school and hopefully to the college of her dreams!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6253328848519168
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Author Description: This is my first story and I would love feedback!! Thank you so much!

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This is my first story on Episode so Iā€™m still trying to figure things out. Iā€™m currently working on finishing chapter three, but Iā€™d love to hear any feedback you have. Iā€™m new to all of this. Itā€™s going to be kind of a drama/romance. Thanks in advance for your help!! :slight_smile:

Title: Stardust to Infinity
Style: INK
Genre: Romance/Drama/Comedy
Episodes Released: 4 . 5 in in progress.
Description: Freedom is music to Scarlettā€™s ears, but will meeting one Irishmen change everything? Will the stars align, or will they burn out?
Link: http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/4932618556407808

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