I would LOVE to review/rate your story


#225

This story is SO good! I highly recommend it! 5/5


#226

Sent a DM


#227

Hi @Killer0Succubus! Are you still doing reviews? If so, please check out my story, “Our Galaxies Intertwined!”

I published the first 3 chapters last night and I would really appreciate your thoughts, feedback, and support!!

Linktree: https://linktr.ee/msnattyjames

Episode link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5776939295834112

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Please read and let me know what you think!!

Story Bio:
When danger comes to Earth in the form of a sexy alien, intrigue and drama follow when he falls for shy girl, Genevieve.


#228

Hi, my story:
Title: Dear Lilly
Author: Mónica Cristina
Genre:Romance
Episodes: 7 (ongoing)
Style: Ink
Link: Dear Lilly

Thanks :slight_smile:


#229

4/5! I HIGHLY recommend this story! She only has 106 reads and that is nuts! Sense of humor is awesome and the directing is really good as well! It has drama, mystery, love, and humor in only 5 episodes! Give it a try you guys!


#230

Thanks!


#231

Thanks!!


#232

Hi, I would love you to review my story. I just published it on Sunday but I worked really hard on it.
Only the first 2 episodes are out by the way.

Title: Better on my Own
Author: Joanna Banana
Style: Ink
Small cover:


Story description: Camila has never needed anyone’s help. She’s a one woman army. But what happens when she is forced to accept the help of a mysterious guy to accomplish her greatest mission yet?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6447079579582464

Thank you :smile:


#233

Story: Skai’s Stories
Author: Mystery.episode (me)


#234

Hey! I’d love some constructive criticism on my story <3
Title: Subverted
Author: Epithet
Cover art:

Thank you for taking time to read peoples stories and give them feedback :slight_smile:


#235

name of the story: Aching for the bad girl
Author name: Olivia Carlson
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6183635604340736


#236

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#237

Hi, I’d love a review! I’m always looking forward to improve!
Author’s name: Lady Bird
Story title: The Triangle!

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#238

Hi!
If you want you can read my story. I just published it. It is my first story ever. It now has three episodes. It is far from perfect… So let me know…

Name of story: It was just a secret
Authors Name: storiesbyanouk


#239

Title - Midnight Memories
Author - Evija


#240

My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Fantasy/Mystery
Story style: All the 3 episode characters types: LIMELIGHT, INK & ORIGINAL
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
How many Episodes to review : 4 (but 3 is alright )
Most proud of my story : The Originality, Diversity and a lot of interesting advanced directing techniques despite being a newbie. No romance.

  • Pitfalls : Definitely your number 3 and 4 :sweat_smile: and also Coming up with plot beforehand. My ideas keep changing.
    Pay most attention to : The plot. If it may be too confusing or anything that I could improve.
    Goal : Is it worth sharing? To know if there are any areas I can improve.
    Inspired from : First, the myths, legends, folktales and lores of the different cultures of Asia (Malay, Chinese, Indian, Thailand and more). Second, the stories of my grandmother when she was a child during the Japanese Occupation in WWII and how she was saved. Third, the cartoon series “Avatar The Last Airbender”. Fourth, the sun worshippers in Peru, South America and other similar cultures. Fifth, the lessons at my school: Social Studies, History and Geography. Last, my own homeland: Singapore & Hometown & nearby island of Sentosa.

Is there anything that you should be aware? :
Is my second time publishing a story and first time entering an Episode contest for it (Thriller Contest thus only 5 chapters). Oh yes, the unique and difficult names. The tribe also consists of different coloured people to enhance my meaning of diversity. The tribe is fictitious but inspired by various sources. Some of the languages are in Sumerian, Sanskrit and Babylonian. A little ironic given the story is taken place in East South East Asia.

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#241

TITLE:Emerald Falls
AUTHOR: JJ
GENRE: Thriller (Action and Romance)
STYLE: INK
EPISODES: 8 (Ongoing)
DESCRIPTION: What happens when Good Girls like Bad Boys. Sparks will ignite, and Bullets will fly so strap yourselves in for a ride of Twists, Turns, Murder and Love in Emerald Falls.


#242

I just published my first ever Episode story today, and if you’d have time to take a look I’d be really grateful.
It’s called What’s Your Emergency? by Sathael, about a 999 police radio operator and snarker extraordinaire who might actually find out that the police officer on her team that she hates might not actually be the arsehole she thought he was.
Romance genre. Three episodes published so far. Working on the fifth at the moment.


#243

Hey!! i’m Sofia

I’ve just published my story and I’d appreciate if you’d possibly have time to check it out :slight_smile:

TITLE; 18 SECONDS
DESCRIPTION: Myana was in an accident that left her blind. Follow her on her epic journey as she discovers her extraordinary gift on her quest to uncover the cold case of her deceased boyfriend
CHAPTERS; 3 ( more coming soon )
AUTHOR; Sofia Taffs (@sofia_episode) instagram handle
STYLE; INK
LINK:* http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5239413285453824


#244

Hi! I would appreciate a review! :heart:

As a young writer, you find inspiration in an unexpected place. Is the hot firefighter you wrote about really just a figment of your imagination? When your book becomes a movie, you’ll have to choose: lie or risk losing everything! CC, INK.

This story has two layers, some drama, a lot of romance and humor to keep it balanced.