Ibukun's Detailed Story Review Requests

Could you dm it

I’ll take a look at it!

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Definitely! I’ll take a look at it

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Dm’d you my feedback!

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I just sent my feedback to your dm!

Thank you so much!!!

I thought I replied you. I’ll definitely take a look at it

Sure! I’ll take a look at it

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No yeah for sure, thanks :innocent:

Hi I just published my first story i would really appreciate it if you could review it☺️ Feedback would be really useful x

Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6385754294124544

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Thank you! I appreciate it a lot​:two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts:

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here are the details - please be brutally honest! It really helps (take your time! :heartbeat:):

  • Story title -The Flame Between Us
  • Genre - Drama
  • Story description - After being sent to Military School for 3 long years, Ellen begins her senior year at her old school, Maxwell High. What could go wrong when her past comes back to bite her?
  • Episode user - Brianna Cavazos
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  • Link to your story - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5005532319514624
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Yay me too. I’ll take a look at it!

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I’ll be constructively honest. I want you to actually be able to use my feedback to better your story. Being brutally honest doesn’t really help lol

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That’s true. Being brutal doesn’t really help. Thank you

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Hey, I’d like to get a review from you!

Name: Arena Of Pride
Genre/s: Drama filled with romance
Author: Jelly
Episodes: 9 (more coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6418652016607232

Description:
The streets of Morocco are swimming in crime secrets. Accidentally - a twist of fate, drags Layla and her family deep down in the mafia world, where she meets Oscar Kebryak.

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I’ll take a look at it!

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Hey there :slight_smile: I’d love a review! Here’s my story:

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For sure! I’ll take a look at it

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Thank you so much!