My story’s link is : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5137741814038528
The name : Exorcism Of Phoebe
Description: Phoebe didn’t think her desires would come true, and that thought led her to do a ritual to Lucifer from Hell. With the help of Seven Deadly Sins, can she beat the Lucifer?
Episodes: Read 1 and 2 only.
Fanmail is appreciated.
Keep it nice people.
Well, you want feedback, we will give it to you, with some critism, you have to learn to take .
Constructive criticism is welcome. However story’s topic is sensitive. So before going ahead and telling me to learn stuff, you should’ve read the description. It has a lot of religion in it.
Alright. I might read it, but since I don’t have a phone ( I maaaaaay have broke it) I can’t really go on Episode, but when I get the chance, I will!!
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Alright, thank you 
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I’ll read it, but I can only read Episode 1 because I’ve ran out of passes.
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It’s only 2 episodes anyway, don’t worry 
I just finished Episode 1, and it’s pretty good! It was very interesting! However, that picture at the beginning was there for a bit too long, so (if possible) you could make it last for a shorter period of time. Some readers may be quite impatient, and wait for a little bit then click off.
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Topic closed due to one month of inactivity.