I can’t figure out what I’m doing wrong…
Script:
ETHAN (talk_neutral_unsure)
It was...
choice
“Important.” {
ETHAN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
It was important.
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
readerMessage Lauramar understands.
LAURAMAR +1 (talk_awkward_loop)
Okay.
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
gain IMPORTANT
} “Not important.” {
ETHAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
It wasn't very important.
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
readerMessage Lauramar feels forgotten.
LAURAMAR (talk_unsure)
I see…
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
gain UNIMPORTANT
}
&cut to zone 3
&zoom on 640 339 to 224% in 0
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_right
ETHAN (talk_shrug_concerned)
Are we okay?
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
LAURAMAR (talk_awkward_loop)
Yes, we’re okay.
&cut to zone 3
&zoom on 640 339 to 224% in 0
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_right
ETHAN (talk_think_neutral)
More importantly,
ETHAN (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
Are |italic|you|reset|okay?
ETHAN (talk_shrug_concerned)
You seem really… down.
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
if (IMPORTANT) {
readerMessage You chose: |color:red|important.|reset| Lauramar opens up to Ethan.
LAURAMAR (talk_sad)
My Mom was furious.
&cut to zone 3
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@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_right
ETHAN (talk_apathetic)
Isn’t she always?
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
LAURAMAR (talk_unsure)
No this…
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
LAURAMAR (talk_sad_serious_loop)
It was worse than usual.
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
&LAURAMAR is deepbreath
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
&LAURAMAR is deepbreath
@LAURAMAR is cry_sniff_sad_loop
@pause for a beat
&cut to zone 3
@LAURAMAR moves to layer 1
@ETHAN moves to layer 0
&zoom on 706 246 to 171% in 0
&LAURAMAR spot 1.438 105 -71 AND LAURAMAR is hug_neutral_rear AND LAURAMAR faces left
@ETHAN spot 1.527 143 -118 AND ETHAN is hug_nervous_loop
@pause for a beat
@speechbubble is 180 289 to 122% with tail_top_left
ETHAN (hug_talk_concerned_loop)
Shhh… it’s okay.
I’m here.
INT. CAFETERIA TABLE OL - DAY
&zoom reset
&MAX spot 1.433 254 -98 in zone 1 AND MAX is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop
&OSSIE spot 1.457 79 -90 in zone 1 AND OSSIE is search_neutral
@overlay CREAM CHEESE BAGEL create
@overlay CREAM CHEESE BAGEL opacity 1 in 0
@overlay 6225746096029696_CREAM CHEESE BAGEL shifts to 84 155 in 0
@overlay 6225746096029696_CREAM CHEESE BAGEL scales to 0.278 0.278
@overlay CHOCOLATE DONUT create
@overlay CHOCOLATE DONUT opacity 1 in 0
@overlay 6225746096029696_CHOCOLATE DONUT shifts to 193 164 in 0
@overlay 6225746096029696_CHOCOLATE DONUT scales to 0.327 0.327
@zoom on 320 340 to 254% in 3
@pause for a beat
&zoom reset
&OSSIE is search_neutral
@MAX spot 1.433 249 -22 AND MAX is standup_neutral
@pause for a beat
@MAX walks to spot 1.433 415 -26 AND MAX is walk_sad_loop
@transition fade out black 1
} else {
readerMessage You chose: |color:red|unimportant.|reset| Lauramar doesn’t open up.
LAURAMAR (talk_sad)
It’s nothing.
@LAURAMAR is deepbreath
LAURAMAR (talk_agree_happy)
I’m fine, see?
&cut to zone 3
&zoom on 640 339 to 224% in 0
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_right
ETHAN (talk_think_neutral)
If you say so.
&zoom on 498 247 to 224% in 0
&cut to zone 2
@speechbubble is 171 184 to 122% with tail_top_left
LAURAMAR (talk_shrug_neutral)
I’m going to go to the bathroom.
&zoom on 502 351 to 224% in 1
@LAURAMAR spot 1.213 175 42 AND LAURAMAR is standup_neutral
LAURAMAR (talk_shrug_concerned)
See you later.
@LAURAMAR walks to spot 1.213 -23 45 in 2 AND LAURAMAR is walk_sad_loop
}