Okay guys so I decided to make a story and I plan on spending about a couple of months or a year before publishing the story, the thing is I don’t know if you would like it or change it
I need help with my plot or more like feedback. If you would change it tell me how it should change. If you like it then… I guess you just like it. lol.
In my personal opinion, I think it should have deeper drama but idk how that’s why I came on here.
After 17 years of being kidnapped and trained into an assassin, Josephine Brown finds her biological father and murders him in front of his other daughter, Erin. As two years pasts, Erin seeks the death of her unknown half-sister. As Josephine also seeks for more vengeance.