I'll give u feedback


#1

i’m willing to give anybody some amateur feedback. :sunny: :blush:


#2

Hi, @amiedgy!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#3

Hey! Thankyou for doing this!!

Name of the story: Falling for a Superstar
Episode username: Nishee
Genre: Romance
Description: Nicole unknowingly kisses a Superstar. Revelation,Differences, Acceptance! In the world of fame, can true love win?
No. of published episodes: 8 (ongoing)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6115422028038144


#4

Hi @amiedgy,
Thank you for creating this thread! I recently published my first story and would love to get some feedback. Here are the details of my story:

Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664


#5

I would love if you could give feedback on my collab story, H & V: Twisted Truth!
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4930114276163584

Thank you for doing this! :hugs:


#6

Hi, thanks so much! I’ve really been looking for feedback, especially really honest feedback so don’t hold back! Here’s my story:

Name: Reformed
Author: Cordelia M
Description: Violet gave up a life of petty crime and way too much black leather over a year ago. New bad boy Carter can’t seem to resist trying to uncover her dark past. Is she truly reformed?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968

Thanks again! Xx


#7

Hey! Yes please! X

Mine is

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
Romance, betrayal and secrets. What will happen when Isobel gets involved in the black market of the art world and a sexy gang leader?


#8

Hi! Here’s my story. Thanks for supporting!

[DEMON GOD]
Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4678673313693696


#9

Thank you for this.

Author: Selinalunaria
Story: Schoolboy’s Fantasies
Episodes: 6, ongoing
Genre: LGBT romance and Drama


#10

Some feedback would be amazing! :blush: :sparkling_heart:
Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352 1
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode


#11

My story:


#12

I would love to hear your thoughts , anytype of feedback will be appreciated
Name—>Choose!!!
Author—>@ya
Genra —> adventure (sci-fi actually)
Link—>


No.of Episode —> 3(complete)
Feel free to leave fanmail if you like :wink:


#13

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::blush:


#14

Thank you very much!

Title: Revival
Author: Grace S
Genre: Action
Episodes: 10
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4762507897602048
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#15

Thank you for doing this! I’d love some honest feedback on my new story


#16

Hey! Thanks for creating this thread!Id love to get a feedback!
My story : Let the demon inside


Gender: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood because of your brother. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#17

Hey! This is so nice of you to do! If could read the first three chapters that would be great :blush:

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Author - Hannah & Carly
Number of episodes - 3 so far
Genre - Drama (also a comedy, romance & mystery)
Instagram - harly_episode
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896

Thank you so much :kissing_heart:


#18

I’d like to hear your feedback! @amiedgy
Here’s my story:

Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance w/ a touch of Fantasy (but i put it in the fantasy section)
Episodes: 4 ongoing
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5630801559027712
IG: @authorlou.episode

Why should you give this story a read?
Well I know it’s title appears to be so cliche but don’t be fooled 'cause it’s beyond what you expected. Find out what it feels like to be in a dog’s feet by reading Alli’s thoughts. Will Jason be able to admit his true feelings for Alli after finding out she’s his puppy?


#19

*FIRST CHAPTER IS DONE, AND I’M HALFWAY DONE THE SECOND

Description:
Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally.

LINK:

SMALL COVER:
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LARGE COVER: