I'll review your story for you (closed whilst i catch up)

i just read the first episode.

  • I love how it’s a unique story and the storyline hasn’t been wrote before.
    -I love how it’s spreading awareness about these illnesses.
    -I also love how you said in the end of the first episode that kids are growing up to fast these days and you chose the opposite for kyle. I honestly just love how kyle is immature because it adds personality to his character.

There isn’t anything i have to say about it that’s negative and im going to continue reading.

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