Yea, sorry
the end brakes need to be before the next choice, like I showed you here, you cant have a space between options
I tried adding a choice in a choice, i didnt think it would be this hard
then you just the same like this
NAME
Text
choice
“option 1” {
NAME
Text
choice
“option 1” {
NAME
Text
}
“option 2” {
NAME
Text
}
}
“option 2” {
NAME
Text
}
Ok, ill try
Everything is just a mess i don’t know what im doing and it keeps saying error
Copy and paste your entire dressing game here. It will be easier to spot the error if we can see more of the choice
ok
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Chapter 2- Drama
INT. SUSHI RESTAURANT OL - NIGHT
@ROSA changes into ROSA_default
@JAKE stands screen right AND JAKE faces left
@GRACE stands upscreen right AND GRACE faces left
@CHLOE spot 1.280 144 4 in zone 1
@CHLOE moves to layer 3
@ROSA enters from left to screen left AND ROSA faces right
@JAKE spot 1.391 290 2 in zone 1
@JAKE moves to layer 2
@zoom on 83 407 to 146% in 0.5
@CHLOE faces right
@speechbubble is 210 279 to 100% with tail_top_left
CHLOE (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT! There is NO way in heck that I’m going to be related to her!
@zoom on 320 520 to 172% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 149 273 to 100% with tail_top_right
JAKE (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Chloe! Its time to move on.
JAKE (talk_neutral)
Right Rosa...
@zoom on 0 537 to 172% in 0.5
@zoom on 0 438 to 256% in 0.2
@speechbubble is 194 192 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_repulsed)
Um...
choice
“Run Away”{
ROSA (talk_complain_angry)
I hate you all
@ROSA exits left AND ROSA is run_cry_embarrassed_loop
@zoom on 224 397 to 256% in 0.2
GRACE (callout_neutral)
Rosa…Come back…
EXT. JEZEBEL STREET - NIGHT
@ROSA enters from left to screen right AND ROSA is run_cry_embarrassed_loop
INT. SIMPLE LIVING ROOM - DAY
@ROSA enters from left to screen right AND ROSA is run_cry_embarrassed_loop
INT. ANGIE BED - NIGHT
@ROSA enters from left to screen right AND ROSA is run_cry_embarrassed_loop
@zoom on 320 318 to 103% in 0.5
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 320 174 to 204% in 0.5
ROSA (idle_sit_sad_loop)
(Oh…My…Gosh)
(No way)
(Did i just run all the way from the streets to here!)
(Wait…did i run away from my mom)
(She’s going to kill me!)
sound door_knock
ROSA (idle_sit_sad_loop)
(Oh no)
sound door_knock
@ROSA faces left
@zoom on 320 348 to 204% in 0.35
ROSA (callout_neutral)
Coming!
@zoom on 191 355 to 204% in 0.5
@GRACE enters from left to screen center
@GRACE is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop
@zoom on 255 355 to 185% in 0.5
ROSA (talk_sad_serious_loop)
Are you mad at me…
GRACE (talk_doubtful)
No, although i thought you were being very very reckless by doing that
GRACE (talk_sad_timid_loop)
But i understand why you did that
GRACE (talk_sad)
I know its going to be hard, Getting over your dad, but we can get over him together i promise.
ROSA (talk_armraised_sad)
Really?
GRACE (talk_handsonhips_neutral_loop)
Of course, nothing, not even Jake can break the love i have for you hun
ROSA (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
Thanks mom
GRACE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
I'm going to leave you to get dressed.
@GRACE exits left
@zoom on 318 410 to 185% in 0.5
@zoom on 316 427 to 230% in 0.5
label choosing_outfit
ROSA (idle)
(What should i wear to sleep?)
choice “Sleep Outfit 1” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_1
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 320 427 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 320 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 320 427 to 311% in 1
} “Sleep Outfit 2” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_2
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 320 427 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 320 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 320 427 to 311% in 1
}
ROSA (think_rubchin)
(Is this the one for me?)
choice “This is the one” {
ROSA (cheer_handsin)
This is perfect for good sleep!
} “Nah” {
goto choosing_outfit
}
ROSA (yawn_bored)
(Good night)
}
“Shout and Scream” {
ROSA (scream_angry)
Ughhhhh
ROSA (talk_angry)
WHY DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO RUIN MY LIFE.
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE MY MOM
ROSA (talk_sad)
I wanna live with dad.
@zoom on 242 413 to 256% in 0.5
GRACE (talk_sad_timid_loop)
Rosa..I'm so sorry for putting you in this way
GRACE (talk_sad_serious_loop)
Come here hun
@ROSA spot 1.280 234 9 in zone 1
@ROSA moves to layer 2 AND ROSA is cry_sniff_sad_loop AND faces right
ROSA (hug_neutral_loop_rear)
I...wanna...go..hhome.
GRACE (hug_nervous_loop)
I know hun...
@zoom on 117 402 to 256% in 0.5
CHLOE (talk_doubtful)
What a baby.
@JAKE faces left
@zoom on 320 515 to 256% in 0.5
JAKE (talk_accuse_angry)
Chloe…not now.
JAKE (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Lets go home now.
It's seems shes not in a good condition, Babe
GRACE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Good idea.
@CHLOE exits left
@JAKE exits left
@GRACE exits left
@ROSA exits left
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
At the house.
INT. SIMPLE LIVING ROOM - DAY
@zoom reset
@JAKE enters from left to screen right AND JAKE faces right
@JAKE spot 1.280 274 35 in zone 1
@JAKE moves to layer 2
@GRACE enters from left to upscreen right AND GRACE faces right
@CHLOE enters from left to screen center AND CHLOE faces right
@CHLOE spot 1.280 149 4 in zone 1
@CHLOE moves to layer 3
@ROSA enters from left to screen left AND ROSA faces right
@JAKE faces left
JAKE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
We are going to head home now..
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
K bye babe
JAKE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Bye
@CHLOE exits left
@JAKE exits left
@GRACE faces left
ROSA (talk_sad)
Mom i...didn't mean what i said i was just angry.
GRACE (sigh_disappointed)
I know hun
ROSA (talk_exhausted)
I'm going to get dressed for bed
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Ok sweetie
@ROSA exits right
INT. ANGIE BED - NIGHT
@ROSA enters from left to screen center
@zoom on 161 420 to 183% in 0
label choosing_outfit
ROSA (idle)
(What should i wear to sleep?)
choice “Sleep Outfit 1” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_1
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
} “Sleep Outfit 2” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_2
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
}
ROSA
(Is this good?)
Choice
“This is the one”{
ROSA (cheer_handsin)
This is perfect for good sleep!
}
“Nah”{
goto choosing_outift
}
ROSA (yawn_bored)
(Goodnight)
Choice
“Oh um right”{
}
ROSA (talk_sad)
Yeah....
@zoom on 320 520 to 172% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 149 273 to 100% with tail_top_right
JAKE (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
See even Rosa understands
@zoom on 144 459 to 256% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 130 166 to 100% with tail_top_right
CHLOE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Whatev
@zoom on 266 441 to 256% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 131 185 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Its getting dark lets go home
@zoom on 4 453 to 188% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 145 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_armscrossed_sad_loop)
Yeah.
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@zoom reset
NARRATOR
At the house.
INT. SIMPLE LIVING ROOM - DAY
@JAKE enters from left to screen right AND JAKE faces right
@JAKE spot 1.280 274 35 in zone 1
@JAKE moves to layer 2
@GRACE enters from left to upscreen right AND GRACE faces right
@CHLOE enters from left to screen center AND CHLOE faces right
@CHLOE spot 1.280 149 4 in zone 1
@CHLOE moves to layer 3
@ROSA enters from left to screen left AND ROSA faces right
@JAKE faces left
JAKE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
We are going to head home now..
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
K bye babe
JAKE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Bye
@CHLOE exits left AND JAKE exits left
@GRACE faces left
@ROSA walks to spot 1.280 101 3 in zone 1
@ROSA moves to layer 2
@zoom on 152 444 to 197% in 0.5
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_awkward_loop)
Mom...can we talk.
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Of course any time hun
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I don't want you to get married!
ROSA (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
The only reason i acted calm was because i didn't want to make you sad.
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Hun its ok i know how you feel
GRACE (talk_apathetic)
When your father left i felt alone and sad
GRACE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
But then i found Jake and here we are today
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
But do you still love dad...
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Of course i do.But he left and we have to move on.
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Thanks mom
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Of course
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_left
ROSA (talk_armsraised_neutral)
I'm going to get dressed
@speechbubble is 153 221 to 100% with tail_top_right
GRACE (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Ok sweetie
@ROSA exits right
INT. ANGIE BED - NIGHT
@ROSA enters from left to screen center
@zoom on 161 420 to 183% in 0
label choosing_outfit
ROSA (idle)
(What should i wear to sleep?)
choice “Sleep Outfit 1” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_1
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
} “Sleep Outfit 2” {
@ROSA is undress_top
@ROSA is undress_bottom
@ROSA changes into ROSA_Sleep_Outfit_2
@ROSA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 0 to 311% in 1
@zoom on 154 413 to 311% in 1
}
ROSA (think_rubchin)
(Is this the one for me?)
choice “This is the one” {
ROSA (cheer_handsin)
This is perfect for good sleep!
} “Nah” {
goto choosing_outfit
}
Can you edit your reply above? It looks like you pasted it more than once?
there
I hope this helps
I’m a bit confused. You have that same dressing game 3 times in your script above
Yea…i didn’t know how to cut it off so i kinda put them in all the choices…
So you have 3 choices? Are these the 3?
- “Run Away”
- “Shout and Scream”
- “Oh um right”
Yes
No worries the problem has been resolved
Was just about to explain the errors and show you how to fix them lol glad you got it working now.