Cover 7/10 -
Grammar/spelling: 10/10 - I also liked the text effects you added
Directing: 10/10 - I really liked your directing; it was great! I found nothing wrong with it and It was very
enjoyable to watch.
Plot: 6/10 - The plot seemed to be a bit predictable and I felt like some things were happening way too fast. (For example: when Anastasia and Ethan were talking. This also may just be me but I felt like you should’ve shown them reconnecting a bit more before fast forwarding.)
Length: 7/10 - I think you should have added a cliffhanger at the end to keep the readers intrigued.
I really liked your directing; it was great! I found nothing wrong with it and It was very enjoyable. If you want your story to be more successful I recommend you put a cliffhanger at the end of the episode to intrigue the readers furthermore. I also liked how you added some reasonable choices.
Good luck with your story!